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December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!!!! I luv it. ;)
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was excellent! I can\'t wait for the next chapter.
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello again!
Ah see now this is what I was hoping for and what I meant...This is already blossoming into a literary work of art! I knew you were an excellent author.
Now its poor Kaoru, eh? Well, Yumi will certainly get hers won\'t she. I\'m very interested where you go with this plot line. I do look forward to new chapters and I really hope that I can read the whole version of the chapters. I am assuming you cut out bits to censor for Fanfiction.net?
Considering your refrences to Herbert Spencer and his belief that \"Only the stongest survive\"theory, have you by chance taken a Sociology course? Rarely have I seen such excerps in fanfiction.
Anyway, please keep writting~! I really do like your style!
~De Lazy Lime
Ah see now this is what I was hoping for and what I meant...This is already blossoming into a literary work of art! I knew you were an excellent author.
Now its poor Kaoru, eh? Well, Yumi will certainly get hers won\'t she. I\'m very interested where you go with this plot line. I do look forward to new chapters and I really hope that I can read the whole version of the chapters. I am assuming you cut out bits to censor for Fanfiction.net?
Considering your refrences to Herbert Spencer and his belief that \"Only the stongest survive\"theory, have you by chance taken a Sociology course? Rarely have I seen such excerps in fanfiction.
Anyway, please keep writting~! I really do like your style!
~De Lazy Lime
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You\'ve already finished it? That\'s what i do. The only problem it; i have 12 storys started, so it\'s hard to finish. FYI; cool fic.
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
really good... waiting for the next installment :)
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!! I love this fic. It\'s so well written and I just love it yay. Please post soon.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!! I love this fic. It\'s so well written and I just love it yay. Please post soon.
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes! you wrote more! this story is just getting better. i have to say that i did enjoy kaoru\'s reaction towards kenshin and his action towards her as well. they were simply a great pair, and they were not so shy and very witty. this combination of magic and meiji era is a great idea and i love it (as well as the fairy tale). please write more soon.
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omigod. I love this chapter and how Kenshin and Kaoru are introduced. It\'s so different how Kenshin is so flirty with Kaoru at first meeting and it\'s so very exciting for me. I hope to see more soon.
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November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh that\'s very good so far and I can\'t wait for more.
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November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhh! i definitely like this story. its cute, sad but cute. i look forward to reading more.