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December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.o
And again... O.o
I liked but it could stand more detail... *nods* But of course, no pressure. It was kinda hard to ppicture Yuri and Touma make love... But all in all i twas cool
Please write more Gravi fics, you\'ve got the potential!
--Midnight--
And again... O.o
I liked but it could stand more detail... *nods* But of course, no pressure. It was kinda hard to ppicture Yuri and Touma make love... But all in all i twas cool
Please write more Gravi fics, you\'ve got the potential!
--Midnight--
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December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well...
What next? Don\'t keep me in suspense!! O.o
Can\'t wait until you update again!
=^-^=
--Midnight--
What next? Don\'t keep me in suspense!! O.o
Can\'t wait until you update again!
=^-^=
--Midnight--
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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... Well I like the idea but I think you need to fix Act 2... It\'s the same as Act 1
I like how your going about this and hope you update, but i have one thing to say about this fic\"
The script form. Believe me when I say that it will read much better if you add detail with the emotions and ad a daioloug. *can\'t spell*
If you like, you can contact me and I will GLADLY help you.
Update soon and fix Act 2!
--Midnight--
I like how your going about this and hope you update, but i have one thing to say about this fic\"
The script form. Believe me when I say that it will read much better if you add detail with the emotions and ad a daioloug. *can\'t spell*
If you like, you can contact me and I will GLADLY help you.
Update soon and fix Act 2!
--Midnight--