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I'can book doujinshi hentai, misao & aoshi (birthday fever)

Stellar! For your first lemon this is excellent! Hell, it\'s good for any lemon. Now, write another one.

Tsuki-san

hey chcia~
i love it but then i love alll your story, but i still like Dlg the best...lol, well what can i say it was an excellent lemon. It\'s hard to believe that was your first one. lol. u sure u havent written one before???? lol...well ur iming me so im goonna go talk to you
ttyl, Brandy

Very cute! I don\'t think we can ever have too many AxM fics here at aff. I only noticed a few small descrepinces, such as someone other than Misao calling Aoshi \"Aoshi-sama\", which they never do as far as I know. I think Okon and Omasu might call his Aoshi-kun, haha. Oh and, I dare say that even in the late 1800\'s, Misao would have been considered a woman much younger than 18. laws of consent and whatnot didnt get instated untill much later. oh and..what was it..Something you said about the feeling not \"aboding\" well made me giggle. Abode means like a house, I think you want bode. Anyway, the lemon was great! Perfectly sweet and squishy XD I hope to read more from you soon!

Pretty damn good for a first time...

It was loveable ^-^ I think you are pretty sweet on the lemons. Maybe add more sex or more screams of Aoshi XD I\'ve always liked that ^-^; But it was seriously yummie--good--sour--all in all, I\'d give it a great big \"OH HELL YEAH!!!\"

Wonderful. I wuv it. =D

Great fic. Please continue with another. Can never get enough of Misao/Aoshi

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! i love this. u rock dude.
u should delve into citrus more often

this was fun to read and it was VERY well written.

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