rate_review Reviews

Wow. That was absolutely HOT! Hakkai as the seme playing doctor to poor,sick Gojyo. Heehee, I love it! Crimson, you are such an awesome writer. You made this Gojyo X Hakkai fangirl very, very happy.Keep it up! ^ .^

wow hot. I LOVE THE PAIRING.

Hey! That\'s SO hot! It\'s just great! I would love to read how their relationship goes from here! You should write a sequel to this one letting people know what happens. And if you do, please let me know when you post it! Great story! Keep writing!

This was soooooo cute and tuouching I couldn\'t stop smiling throughout the entire pice. Hakkai finally admiting he\'s a mother....lol. Fastidious little Hakkai and his hidden kink is just too presious. Good job on a one shot. \'-(

that was to be a kinky lille smile....gomen

Fantastic! It was erotic without being obscene, and very true to character. ^_^

Humm this sory was amazing, really hot and i love seeing hakkai like this. Not often is he portray as such and its refreshing to read a fiction where he is more then the angsty uke type. I\'ve checked under your authors name to see if you have other fictions it seems you don\'t, well thats a shame cause u really have a way with words that apeals to me, also your sex scene is very well written, too often do I read stories where a lot of details are missing and the plausibility of the sexual intercourse is debatable (I mean, come on, anal sex with only water as lubrification...please!). Well, all in all, im impressed by this little fic of yours and I hope i\'ll be reading from you again.

MoOdSwInG

DROOL!! MORE!

Nice! And sizzling. I hope you write a sequel to this showing how the relationship deepens and develops. :) Hehe, especially the morning after. ^.~V