rate_review Reviews

Oh, I liked it. I liked it a lot. Maybe a bit more buttsex would have been nice ;D

Oh my god, excellent and coincidentally I just saw that episode a short while ago(when they are in the subway and Anderson has that flashback) now I will never watch it the same way again...which altogether can both good or bad. LOL!

So great work!

sorry i didnt add the second chapter, its on fanart central. wierd huh?

My god, you know I love you, but wtf is up with your grammar? I loved the story, but I went crazy wanted to capatalize all the \"i\" s ... god, your killing me!

Oooother than that, I apperciate another Hellsing Yaoi fic for me to read- always a plus. You should do another one O_O

hey there chica i wuv this story! you are soooo cruel to him! poor anderson...but i suppose it could have been alot worse for him.you should posst more stuffs! talk to you on D.A. later.

Hi, there!
I just read it!

You know what honestly? When I found your story here, I jumped by excitment!(lol)
And you did great job here!!!
I love this with cruel and violent sence (sometime, violence is sexier than sex itself).

Please keep writing!!

AWESOME! That is SO great! I thoroughly enjoyed your story! Poor Anderson though...

Slight mistakes and capitals missing... but except that, a big BRAVO!

The world needs more fics like that one. Keep on writting.

Hello, ducky.

First off, good job at it. The world needs more Hellsing AnxAlxAn fanfictions. Thank you for the contribution to the warfront. I enjoyed this fic, although it could use a bit of technical improvement. You don\'t always capitalize I or the beginning of some sentences. You need to capitalize your I\'ve\'s and I\'m\'s add apostrophes, and you need to add apostrophes to things like wasn\'t. You don\'t need to capitalize certain things, like rammed in one part. However, I\'m not one to talk, as I have issues with making the tenses agree and forgetting letters off words like they, so, we aren\'t perfect. And once again, I thoroughly enjoyed the story, it just needs a little polish to shine a little brighter. Hot damn, that was corny.

I should go write my own fanfictions. ...Excuse me while I run and hide over there. In the bush.

-The Almighty Queen Creepy (Who Cannot Write To Save The Life Of Her And Probably Has An Angry Mob After Her By Now)

thank you! for your support i shall sing you a song..er....queen creepy (looks around to see an empty room)
achem...
if you accidentally falll- in the water! yer in trouble!
spiiderrss will come afterr youuuu (fumble) YOUUUU!!! *dances nude*

well hot piss ive outdone myself once again.

HAY I GOT DIBS ON FIRST REVIEW!!
this is my first fanfic ever.