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by Clarichan

person ladygizarme
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, just wanted to say what i forgot to say before.... thanks for the pocky!! ^________^
*snacks on pocky* mmmmmmm! i shall now go back to waiting....
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You sure do update quickly. :)
Well done, another nice chapter. More, more!
Oh, and I know exactly about that homework stuff... I should be doing that now, acutally, but I\'m not, so you should feel special. I took some time to see if you updated! Lol, I\'m nothing but a slacker, a dirty slacker.
Wooo!
person ladygizarme
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad you update so quickly! Nice chapter, loved Shu-chan\'s little outburst with his fist in the air! LOL Can\'t wait for more...
person Midnight
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhh.... finally I finished reading it! Yay!! Please update soon for me!!

*huggles* Oooooo I wanna see what hapens next you and your friend/ sister have me intrigued...

=^-^=

--Midnight--
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DP here again. I logged in for once, yay! I wish I wasn\'t too lazy to type my full name in...I just notcied that it could stand for double penetration. Lol, not what I was going for. Anyway, Yeah, I forgot to say last review, but that sure was a short chapter. Start giving us some nice, bulky chapters. Yum. =D
person ladygizarme
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great start on this story.... i can\'t wait for more!!!!! i love how you worked in a legitimate reason for shuichi to go around in the girl\'s uniform!!!! sooo yummy.... heheh
person DP
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, as long as you keep going, you can rely on a review from DP. Although, I am a little short on words at times,but I\'ll tell ya what I think. I\'m sure the big question with you two, since you\'re alternating with writing the chapters, is whose do the readers like more? Honestly, I couldn\'t choose. Both are very good. I like the cross dressing thing;I have no idea why. Maybe because Shuichi fits the part so well. I\'ll of course be anticipating some more Yuki in here, he\'s such a god. A wonderfully sexy one at that.

Bravo, you guys don\'t suck at English like so many other authors on this site...(sorry, I just had to include that, horrible grammar irks me).


P.S.
I think the Bastard is a good name for Taki. I tried, but I couldn\'t come up with anything better. I was thinking Jackoff...but eh.

P.P.S.
Continue, continue! :)
person DP
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Completely sexified Yuki to the rescue! I would like very much to read more.
person DP
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m interested. . .please go on.
person Kyarere
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg!!! ^.^ I love this fic!!!!! hehe both chapthers sre good!!! I can\'t pick one over the other!! ^^ Hiro and Shuichi so Kawaii!!! ^.~ Keep up the great work both of you!

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