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for N_G High Skool Battle

by Haruna

person Anon
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heeeyyyyyyyyy. This was a really great chapter! I feel so sorry for the poor Shuichi, but I\'m also happy that he and Eiri finally came each other *nearer*. I hope Eiri will fall in love with Shuichi!!1 Pleeeaaasssee update soon. I just can\'t waite for another chapter (greedy me!! *he he he*).
person Nashii
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was really funny. I absplutly loooovveee it. I\'m really excited how it goeas along. The end of chapter 7 surprised me a little cause I actually didn\'t think Shuichi would do *it* with Eiri. But I think it\'s sweet!!!! Ryuichi and Tathsua make a real sweet couple too. I hope you update soon couse I can\'t waite to read more. *Hope Eiri and Shuichi will be together in the end*
person Kathi
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeaahh, I love this story!!! This is so cool *and we all sit there in audience- land an clap our hand*. Please continue (I\'m so happy that Shuichi and eiri are \'together\' norw)
person Dana
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lol the ending was so funny.Poor Shuichi his story is so sad...
person Suku0_12
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Zhis was my favourite chapter at all. The part with the apron was the best cause it\'s sooooo funy. I think it would be funny if Shuichi actually didn\'t mean it. I wonder how Eiri would react if he makes himself hopes. Or doesn\'t he? On the other side would a lemon be nice too. Hmmmm. I think it would be cool too if someone would be hitting on Shuichi again an Eiri gets jelous. What a great way to show his feelings (Eiris gonna to fall in love with Shuichi, or not?). So pleeeaasseee update soon. I\'m really excited to know how the situation will end.
person Kara
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Its smexy, so just finish it.
And try using grammer fixes in typing programs like mircosoft word.
(:
person Dana
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
About the quetions i would like it how ever you write it, but a lemon would be nice hee hee...
This chapter was so funny and again i loved the parts with the characters from fruits basket. The scene with Yuki and Hatori was so funny (i almost forgot it\'s the same actor) and the one with Kyo (he\'s my favorite!! *sigh*) was also great i wander if haru will hit on Shuichi again in the future.
Please write more.
person Nashii
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey this was really a great chapter. I mean it was fantastic. I could never write a lemon, or even something that I could call al lemon. I think it would be really cool if you continue it like this. But please hurry up because I can\'t wait to know more about Eiri\'s realitionchip with Thoma. I mean, is he in love with him or will he fall in love with Shuichi? I\'m more a fan of the Eiri/Shuichi thing but ... it\'s your story. Pleeeaasssee wrtite more soon!!!
person Nashii
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yesterday night I read your 4th chapter and it was really good. It\'s really interesting to know something of Yukis live before the story started. Please write more soon!!
person Kathi
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really an fan of your fic. I think it\'s really good written and so ..... I just love it. I read your fic first at fanfiction net and wanted to review but I didn\'t really want to log myself in so I searched anf found your story here where I don\'t have to log myself in. So ppplleeeaasssee don\'t stop writing. It would be a shame!!

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