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Looking forward to your next chapter. Enjoying this series very very much!

Wow, I've only just found this and I read it straight through! I love it! And I can't wait for an update!

that was good so much conflict poor shu damn it i'm a girl but sometimes girls can be bitches!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! THE MIKAS SHOULD GET IN A CAR CRASH AND DIE!!!!!!!! VERY SLOWLY AND VERY PAINFULLY!!!! GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey, kick her ass for me, please. and next chapter? when?

YAY!!!!!!!! Finally an update... I am so excited. I want to know more... you can not keep leaving it at these cliffhangers... you are killing me... I must know what happens next... please up date soon, or at least sooner than last time. I LOOOVE this story so keep going.

Wow, I started reading this this morning and now it's a little over 10 pm and I finally finished :) Great stuff! I don't see many long, multi-chaptered YuShu fics that are as in depth as yours - I love how you manage to present things ... I see too many Shui makes Yuki jealous 'cause yuki betrayed him and now wants him back, sort of thing. There's the drama, the jealousy, the betrayal, and it comes out so classy and professional. Hm, I suppose the only thing I'm sort of disappointed in is the friendship between Hiro and Shu. From the beginning of the fic, they didn't seem that close, and through the rest, it's the same - so I have a hard time picturing them as bestfriends. I think Ryu and Shu are more of best friends in this fic. It's like the only time Hiro talks to shu was to yell at him, blame him for something, or rub the yuki thing in, and maybe to congradulate him once and awhile. And Shu only bitched and disregarded him in return for the most part. I guess this is an AU, so they don't have to be all BFF, but I suppose I would've liked to see more 'pals-for-life' moments between them.

Rather then that, I loooved the way this fic has been going. I'm glad you didn't just stop at Yu and shu getting together, because that would've been unforfilling after all the seperation. You're closing up the knots and although I'm screaming 'JUST MAKE EVERYBODY HAPPY - NO more ANNNNGST', I'm glad you didn't just have everybody be okay with YuShu and ToHi and end it. The Mikka thing could end in so many ways and though Yuki and Shu care for each other very much, they're probably going to try and do what they think is 'best' for the other, when really that could only be with each other.

Great stuff, will be looking forward to the next chapter!

Oh my goodness this epic is soooooo good. It is really coming together for a nice end. I really like how Eiri is opening up to Shuichi. Yes it is true that he is angst filled but sometimes even I can only take so much reading on his angst. Oh gosh his Mikko a raving bitch/she needs to grow up!!! I thought it to be rich for Eiri to finally tell her what he bottled up inside. *Rooting for Shu/Yuki!!!!* Tohma and Hiro-I love those 2!!!! They really are quite perfect for each other! Poor Su-chan, I think of all the reading I have done, he really is never paired up with anybody-though I haven't really checked here.

*anxious waits for more to read*

oh my god she is a bitch and now she is go to try to make eire marry her. well i hope that eire do some about that and do not let her make him sad and hurt shuichi and toham and hiro . i know that toham will try to help and make thing right and hiro will he love toham he will stand by his man like shiuchi will. i can not wiat for the rest of the story and see what happen to them all. good luck and up date soom
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Yay finally had time to read the update... I love how you rewrote it and I think you did a pretty good job of keeping everyone in character :) yay! I really like how you are spiraling them towards an ending and I loved how Eiri made up with Mika in a realistic way. The flashbacks were brutal I loved it, and to have eiri feel that way about tatsuha is very believable in your universe, I really reallly enjoyed this and can't wait for more!