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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story! THE DRAMA! IT\'S AMAZING! Please update as soon as you can or I will hunt you down and kick your ass!
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY, took you long enough to update^__~ wonderful enticing chapter! How much longer is it going to take for Yuki and Shuichi to get back together again for another schweet lemon scene? Well, a lime would be nice as well^^ Please update SOON. Keep up the good work^__^!!!
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 14)
Took you WAY too long to update! Please, quicker updates!^^
A few grammar mistakes. I\'m serious, you need a good beta! You can turn to aff.net\'s Yahoo Beta Group! They will gladly lend you a hand or two over there.^_^
Besides the few mistakes here and there, an excellent angst-ridden chapter!! The flashback was oh-so-dramatic! I\'m happy.^_^
More jealous Yuki, please! XDD
Until the next,
Which will come quicker than the last time, right?!
Ja ne~
^_^
<3
Took you WAY too long to update! Please, quicker updates!^^
A few grammar mistakes. I\'m serious, you need a good beta! You can turn to aff.net\'s Yahoo Beta Group! They will gladly lend you a hand or two over there.^_^
Besides the few mistakes here and there, an excellent angst-ridden chapter!! The flashback was oh-so-dramatic! I\'m happy.^_^
More jealous Yuki, please! XDD
Until the next,
Which will come quicker than the last time, right?!
Ja ne~
^_^
<3
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMIGOD!!!! LOL, ok, I have read all 13 chapters and I CANT WAIT till you update more!!!!!
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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have read Triangle and Break Through.
As you know anime is very popular and there are alot of bad fanfiction writers out there,
so I\'m glad that I found your stories.
As you know anime is very popular and there are alot of bad fanfiction writers out there,
so I\'m glad that I found your stories.
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February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 13)
It felt a little rushed; the scenes mashed together in a not-so-lovely way. Take you scenes a little slower, and remember to stick to a certain POV at a time.
\"Tohma’s wavy hair\" Tohma has wavy hair? Well, my manga and anime say otherwise. Please, gather your facts beforehand.
For an un-beta-ed chapter you did very well!^^
Excellent storyline! I can\'t wait for Shu and Yuki\'s confritation!!!
Until teh next,
Ja ne~
It felt a little rushed; the scenes mashed together in a not-so-lovely way. Take you scenes a little slower, and remember to stick to a certain POV at a time.
\"Tohma’s wavy hair\" Tohma has wavy hair? Well, my manga and anime say otherwise. Please, gather your facts beforehand.
For an un-beta-ed chapter you did very well!^^
Excellent storyline! I can\'t wait for Shu and Yuki\'s confritation!!!
Until teh next,
Ja ne~
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Suguru... I hope Tatsuha\'ll notice him.
Tatsuha\'s such an idiot! I can\'t wait for the fight between him and yuki.
I have to say I really liked Mikka\'s flashbacks. It made me feel so bad for her.
I\'m assuming Yuki\'s significant other was Tohma.
By the way,my offer to beta for you still stands.
Tatsuha\'s such an idiot! I can\'t wait for the fight between him and yuki.
I have to say I really liked Mikka\'s flashbacks. It made me feel so bad for her.
I\'m assuming Yuki\'s significant other was Tohma.
By the way,my offer to beta for you still stands.
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear god, can you say cat fight in the near future? Sheesh you ARE evil, but of course in a good way ^^ I wonder what Eiri\'s real reaction was deep down; Shock? Betrayal? Jealousy? Disappointment? Complete and utter anger, not only towards his brother but towards himself? This should be fun, as always can\'t wait until the next chapter comes out and keep up the good work^__^!!!
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*clears throat* oh boy...i can see where this is going to go? can\'t wait for the next chappy...please continue soon :D
*clears throat* oh boy...i can see where this is going to go? can\'t wait for the next chappy...please continue soon :D
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m going to keep this concise. Wow, assy Eiri has reared his \"ugly\" head. :( Poor Shuichi.
Tatsuha mischief you say? Oh la la, I will surely be there to read it.
Of course, I\'ll leave you with a compliment regarding your ability to keep me interested for 11 chapters.
^ Hope that compensates for that compliment.
Tatsuha mischief you say? Oh la la, I will surely be there to read it.
Of course, I\'ll leave you with a compliment regarding your ability to keep me interested for 11 chapters.
^ Hope that compensates for that compliment.