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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:) :D Wowee! That was the best chapter yet (not just because of the sex). Well, what can I say? It was extraordinary. I am so excited about the impending drama!
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!I\'ve been reading your story for a couple days and i have to say that this story is awesome!I love the fluff and the male relationships!!OMG you have to update!!!!your the greatest!!!pls update soon!!!
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG *fans herself* so HOT both lemons rocked!!
*pouts* i like Fruits Basket...
*pouts* i like Fruits Basket...
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh.my.fucking.goddess!!!! that chapter was fucking awesome!!!! i\'m soooo glad you had everything in there that you did... it was all so perfect! i understand about wanting two in the bank before you post/update, cuz i do that too, but i hope you don\'t take time off for too long... i soooo need more! aaah!! *does giddy dance*
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! OH MY FREAKING GOD!!! This chapter was exactly what i wanted! I love Shu and Eiri pairings!! Well at least i know we have something in common. I love angsty fics, Yuki/ Shu pairings the most, Highschool fics....there are so much more but i guess those three are enough :D
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 11)
I\'m a little... dissapointed for two reasons; one, you could see it was rushed, both in the writing and in the beta-ing. A lot of mis-spells and many repeats of expressions and wordings, that if avoided, could have enhanced the chapter. The second reason is the lack of answer to my review, but hopefully that will be dealt with in the next Mikka-oriented chapter.
All in all it was a great chapter, and I hope that when you\'ll have the time, you\'ll go over it with your beta and fix the errors I mentioned.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Ja ne~
I\'m a little... dissapointed for two reasons; one, you could see it was rushed, both in the writing and in the beta-ing. A lot of mis-spells and many repeats of expressions and wordings, that if avoided, could have enhanced the chapter. The second reason is the lack of answer to my review, but hopefully that will be dealt with in the next Mikka-oriented chapter.
All in all it was a great chapter, and I hope that when you\'ll have the time, you\'ll go over it with your beta and fix the errors I mentioned.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Ja ne~
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
all that tension i can\'t wait until the lemons!!!!!!
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww yeah! another great 2 chaps (i can\'t believe it\'s been 2 weeks since i checked up on gravfics!! shame on me!) everything\'s coming together nicely and i\'m happy you have su-kun in there now... and that line about shuichi having his period was classic!! ^____^ aaaaah! and ryuichi!! whooooohoooo!! *does happy dance* and yuki finally came out w/his crush to someone.. and of course that someone was tohma(who else would it be,ne?) ah, i can\'t wait for the next one!!!
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sugoi! I know that finally after this chapter some action between Shuichi and Yuki right am i right....*giggle* Please continue soon! I\'m loving it! :D
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like Tohma\'s little game. I think the one being the brat is the Bad Luck gang. They have to be ready for some rivalry.
Anyway, oooh, Eiri and Shuichi meet? Finally? You mean it? You had better not be pulling my leg, or I will, uh...rip your arms off and beat you with them? :o (kidding, kidding).
Hah, I hope they don\'t get it on when they first meet. That would be a little wacky (not saying I\'d mind too much ;)
Anyway, oooh, Eiri and Shuichi meet? Finally? You mean it? You had better not be pulling my leg, or I will, uh...rip your arms off and beat you with them? :o (kidding, kidding).
Hah, I hope they don\'t get it on when they first meet. That would be a little wacky (not saying I\'d mind too much ;)