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Ryuichi is so cute!!!! OMG i can\'t wait ti\'ll next chapter!!!

ugh, i feel like i wana tore something when i read the part Tohma stradle Eiri-sama, i was like DA AUTHOR PORMISE THERE\'S NO MORE LEMON BETWEEN EIRI AND TOHMA!!! but i\'m glad u didn\'t. RYU WAS SO KAWAI-YEEE~ ~ ~ ~ when is he gonna meet wish Tats? PLEEEZZZ PLEEZZ PLEEEEZZ no TatXMikka pleeezz~~ it feels... i dunno, out of topic for a Gravi fic. So! I WISH EIRI FUCK SHU NEXT CHAPTER!!! or atleast molest da bubbleguim headed teen. ooh ooh, finally Hiro and Shu became more closer after their fist fight huh? u should make them fight more often but pleez dun go to far or else Tohma-san will do something more than playing the keyboard to loose his temper. we dun wan Hiro\'s silky long hair and creamy skin to be damage right? right~

Ryu has brown eyes?? i tot he has blue... i think. becoz i\'ve never seen the series so i only saw the screen caps. God_side Ryu1 is goddamn gorgeous.... no wonder Tats always worship him as much as we woship Hiro-sama... WHEN WILL TOHMA MAKE A MOVE OVER HIRO??? we want lemon! we want lemon! but first give us hot steamy passionate wild sex/fuck between a certain mangaka and Bad Luck\'s frontman first >0<

Mikka Costa or was it Costa rika? anyway, she and nitoru graspa n bad luck.... are the three going to have a match like somthing like in the OVA, the TOKIO FEST?

uh... uh... IS EIRI STILL CAN\'T REMEMBER WHO SHUICHI IS??

I\'m so sorry if this review is short since ur generously enough to write a long long long chapter GOMEN NASAI~ ~

I really enjoyed this Chapter 10. You really are getting good at writing the characters\' emotions in a way that isn\'t distracting; When Shuichi wanted to cry, I wanted to cry too. I loved that part. Keep up the good work; I can\'t wait until next chapter!

(Ch. 10)
Awsome! Thoma\'s pricking the boy\'s nervs just to get into Hiro\'s vein. And pants. XD
Shu met Ryu, and I loved how you dulled it a little by Shu\'s diversion to Eiri, so that Shu wouldn\'t be too overwhelemed by his singing idol.

Poor Mikka, she\'s the only one not gonna get a stinch of attention, \'cause she\'s a BYATCH! XP
Though you still haven\'t explained WHY Mikka and Eiri were together in the first place? Arranged marriage only Mikka wanted? And if so, why didn\'t you use an already existing character? (I.E Ayaka)

I hope in the next chapter Shu and Eiri will not fuck, but that there will be soooooooooo much pent up sexual frustration on both sides that Eiri will try to. I love it when he just tries to land in Shu\'s pants. ^.~


This chapter was totaly awsome! I love evil Thoma! He desireves a nice long hard fuck with Hiro-chan. ^.~


Until the next kick-ass chapter,
[I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!]
Ja ne~

OMG your KILLING me, I need to know what happens, Yuki and Shuichi better get somewhere next chapter or I\'m going to rip out my hair in frustration... other than that twas a very good chapter and keep up the good work and TORTURING ME TO THE POINT OF INSANITY!!!^__^

x3 omg. your story is sexy.
Post more often.
o-o I command theee. x3
~<3

lol...i was kind of hoping that tohma kissed hiro but that would be too fast right....i wonder whats going to happen with mika once tohma and hiro get together...i mean thats IF they do u know...and i want yuki and shuichi to meet again already! i want a very juicy chapter with just them too....please...i will be waiting for the next chapter! :D

I don\'t have much time to say a bunch a stuff (since I\'m supposed to be doing research for a report), but I just wanted to leave a review to urge you on.

Hehe, those little arguments between Hiro and Shuichi are so cute to me for some reason...
Believe me, I will keep reading, even if I have to take some time off of what\'s important. \"All work and no play makes jack a dull boy.\"


I am waiting for Mikka to get her skanky ass on out of the picture...LOL...anyways, nice update.

THERE\'S GONNA B RYU-CHAN APPEARING IN DA NEXT CHAPTER?? HONTO? HONTO HONTO HONTO NI?? YEAH! ALMOST ALL DA CAST R APPEARING SOON NE? NE?

(about Mikka)
for some reason i feel bad for Mikka but then again... at least she get to be fuck by Eiri right? right? all the women Eiri had a relationship with said Eiri is da \"sex-god\". if not, a certain pink hair brat won\'t moan and cried dat loud in da re-mix ne? ne? but rilli, i wish next sunday--- or rather monday (in my country\'s time) come sooooonneererr! i wana know why Eiri still stuck with his \"fiance`\". is it like Ayaka? an agreement between parents? or becoz of something else?

(about Tatsuha)
OooooooooooooOOOOOoooooooooOoooooooohhhhh~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ since da legendary singer is about to make an appearance next chapter.... WILL U PAIR HIM WITH TAT-CHAN?? WILL U? WILL U? or u wana make a twist turning out to be TohmaXRyu and Hiro and Tat nya ha! ha! ha! ha! i hope Mikka treats tat-chan well... i dunno why i\'m saying these but i just hope u wrote Mikka treats Tat-chan well.

(about Hiro and Tohma alone in da room)
“I have to play to release my anger, otherwise I might say something I will regret.” Tohma’s expression was once again his serene façade

woah ~ ~ Tohma is rilli OOC when he\'s angry. i never expect him to slam his palm on the piano after he raise his voice. i wish i cud see dat since he\'s potrayed as always smiling and i think his smiles is enough to make that person know what Tohma thinks. If Tohma smile a mocking smile, he\'s mocking dat person. if Tohma smile a cold smile, that person might felt he won\'t get away if da president won\'t let him go. etc.

ooOOOoooooOOOoohhh~ ~ ~ i was hoping da president made a move towards Bad Luck\'s hottest guitarist but nooooo he just touch his face and walk away... if not Tohma, at least Hiro made the move?

oooohh yeah, its un-Tohma-ish when he yell and cry the abused pillow. if i imagine da real Tohma, he might just calmly walk into his office, lock da door, open his secret cabinet which reveals a half thorn picture of Shuichi on a dartboard full of holes from practices late nights and continue his session expertly as he let loose his frustration to Eiri-san on his mobile ! oh ho ho ho~ ok, i was just kidding.

i mean da real Tohma would maybe went to his office, sit at his comfy chair, swirl around and look outside to the scenery of bz Tokyo. breaking numerous things he could grab on the table.

(Hiro on Maiko)
since Hiro feels \'sour\' around Maiko, does dis mean Tohma have a chance? but Hiro said he\'s not gay... why not just pair da guitarist with da trigger happy manager rite now? but then again i wana read ur version of HiroXTohma fic too...

(about Hiro and Shu and Eiri)
\"Love does not discriminate; the heart doesn’t care whether they’re a man or a woman.”

i like what Shuichi said, though it did sound kinda familiar like i have heard dat somewhere... is Shuichi going to be da only uke in ur fic or either Hiro or Tohma will join him in the list. u still haven\'t answered my previous question, whose gonna be seme and uke in TohmaXHiro? what\'s da progress between Eiri and his current fascination over a young male singer? does he still listen to the songs and sketches Shuichi\'s face? i want lemon between Eiri and Shu! i want lemon! i want lemon! hot sweaty arousing mind-fucking passionate bed scene or couch scene between the mangaka and singer!!

oh monday! i just wish today is da day b4 next monday!! sometimes i wana fly to ur place, kidnap all Gravi, espcially Eiri and Hiro plushies u got and strangle u to tell me what\'s da rest of da story of ur future chapters!!

sorrie if my review dis time is not as long as u wanted but dats all i cud write to review. gomen nasai...

When are you going to have Tohma and Hiro \"DO\" somthing together... it\'s making me impatient, along with Shuichi and Yuki meeting..again. And then I hope that Mikka will catch Shuichi and Yuki together and Mika catch Tohma and Hiro together because that would be really funny to see their reactions and to also get them out of the picture...maybe. Well I\'m very anxious about the next chapter coming out, keep up the good work ^__^