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Tohma\'s losing it... i kind of like that!!
OH i don\'t like it when Hiro and Shuichi fight...
I hope that soon there\'ll be a big moving make up scene (pretty please...)
Yay!! Ryuichi\'s coming!! i hope to see alot of Shu/Ryu friendship it\'s so sweet!!

(Ch. 9)
Ryu\'s next? Ryuchi\'s next!! I can guess that he\'ll help Shu find a more centered, and less self-indulgent, way.
Or maybe Kumaguou will, ne?^^

Excellent chapter! Hurra!
No wonder Shu and Hiro realized what\'s going on! The way Thoma acted. Damn that bastard for being a meanie! And in the anime, he really did look like he was enjoying throwing Suguru at the BL boys. Really.

I loved what ya did with Shuichi\'s reveresed Hiro comment to Hiro himself. Brilliant.^^

The scene when Eiri opens the door in beginning... *mouth over-flows with drool*
He was soooo sexy!! I could just totaly imagin it!!!!
Please, give us some hott steamy YukiXShu action!!! :P
Soon!!^^

Wonderful, creative, mind-numbing chapter!!!
Love ya to death,
Until next sunday,
Ja ne~

\"a disgrace\"? is that what mama and papa Uesugi really tot of Eiri? honestly... i actually \"cried\" in my heart when i read that. so i was wrong all these time... i tot mama Uesugi have blonde hair and so Eiri inherited her beauty...

mama Uesugi is still alive? i\'ve never seen da series and only read scanlated Gravi manga up to vol. 6 and i never saw how mama Uesugi look like. all i know dat Eiri had a rough time when he was a kid, all the oba-sans\' gossip and wonder whether lil\' Eiri-chan is a `half`.... yes... i never tot of what happen between Eiri and his parents before... i only tot Eiri didn\'t rilli mind them after what happen in NY...

all these tym i tot after da incidence in NY, Eiri moved back to Japan, move out of the temple, live in Tokyo, fuck lots of woman and met Shuichi.

i don\'t know what to say... it\'s more than awful if our own parents tot of us as a disgrace... Eiri rilli had a rough time... but the blonde hair and eyes didn\'t just came in da Uesugi genes just like that! it must have came either by papa or mama Uesugi. i always tot Eiri is more close to mama Uesugi than papa Uesugi but when Tat-chan is born, mama Uesugi died.

Tatsuha must have been pressured. he didn\'t just need to go to skool be he also have to inherited the family shrine as the head. since Mika already married to Tohma, Eiri in his own world in Tokyo, all papa Uesugi could count for only left Tatsuha.

Thank you for telling me another fact about Yuki Eiri that only God knows when i\'ll discover it on my own. Murakami-sensei is a yaoi prefessional mangaka, i simply love her work! It really surprise me and the more i wanted to go to Eiri and comfort him.

so! back to ur fic. is Ryu-chan gonna make an appearance?? will you couple him with Tatsuha-kun?? i\'m so excited! i wish sunday will come soooner!!
poor Tatsuha, i myself will feel a lot more horrible if my mother yell at me to go away. but i tot papa Uesugi already knew about Tatsuha\'s \"bi\", i guess he didn\'t. it really flow in the family that da memebers have musician partners. Mika with Tohma, Tatsuha with Ryu, Eiri with Shu1. i just can\'t wait for a hot lemon between da mangaka and singer of bad luck.

i dun think i\'ll like Mikka Costa. whenever i came across her name, it strangely reminds me of Double Deckers. strange aren\'t i? i wish she won\'t touch Eiri any more in ur future chapter, pair her with someone else please... Eiri is only reserve for Shuichi and that\'s final! oh ho ho ho...

Tohma really didn\'t like Maiko ne? why did you write her like she did it just to annoy her brother and friend. i fopund dat Shuichi\'s and Hiro\'s childhood skool past is cute! it suits them and yup, Shuichi is so typical to do that. i wonder if Tatsuha did da same, he does worship his Sakuma-san right?

will other characters show up soon? like K or Fujisaki, Tohma did mention about a drummer for the band right? no? maybe i got the wrong person.

here\'s the deal, i can\'t review as much as i reviewed your last chapter coz u didn\'t input must \'things\' in dis chapter. in ur last chapter i review every moments of it but dis chapter only have about 2 or 3 moments = Tohma with Shuichi and the others & how situation looks like in te temple & Eiri taking Tatsuha with him.

i\'m not saying i dun like dis chapter, it\'s great! but it\'s not enuf. i want more flashbacks and more detalied things happens. wish u write more in the next instalment. i\'m sorry if u dun like dis review but i was trying to be honest. sorry if i offended you.

i understand that lots of authors likes to read good review more than just 4 or 5 lines. they got more encourage and love to write more in their story.

Haruna.

coolzies! i\'m so glad you update on such a regular basis... i\'d like to but it doesn\'t seem to work out that way for me... anyway, my fic is IY/YYH-Unexpected Ally- and it\'s only on fanfiction.net and mediaminer.org... cuz it\'s prob not gonna get too steamy... eventually i\'ll prob do Grav, but want to focus on one thing right now so i don\'t slack off on it... anyway... on to the review! ohhh maiko! way to be the annoying/clueless younger sis... and her proclamations of she and hiro\'s \"relationship/future marriage\"... yikes, is that gonna add further drama? and the guys don\'t know, huh, since she was speaking in english? shu seems to be catching on a bit to the spark between hiro/tohma.... aaah! when will they realize together?? lol about yuki\'s \"confession\" nice so now tatsuha\'s in the picture and soon ryuichi..... is suguru coming in at all?? okay... i think that\'s all the questions... lol... so, yeah, great chap and see ya at the next one! ^_____^

Wow so I guess we\'ll be seeing Ryuichi soon I love him!!
I\'m a little impatient about Y/S but that\'s my problem.
By the way I\'ve never really Beta-ed before but i could try if it\'s fixing spelling mistakes and stuff like that then sure!
I\'ll send you and e-mail too.

*kneels down* ONEGAI SHIMASU SENSEI!!!!

there....u promised so u better not! lol...kidding if u must go ahead...*giggle* Yuki is sooo evil. man i really can\'t wait till he meets shuichi...i hope they meet soon....even if there is no action...:D

Great chapter, really. I was really enjoying myself when Maiko was embaressing Shuichi and Hiroshi infront of Tohma. It all seemed very in character. Also, if you\'re looking for a beta reader, I\'m interested in the offer.

(Ch. 8)
Wonderful chapter!
I noticed, when at the shrine, when Eiri started acting really cold, Thoma thought of \'Eiri\' as \'Yuki\' - something I thought was very profound and in-place. It\'s very nice to see a writer concise to detail, both knowingly and not.

I hope to see how you\'ll get to both Yuki/Shu and Thoma/Hiro [a pairing I have yet to see, honestly.]

Maiko.. Gah! What a nag! But I liked her Hiro-comment!=^.^=

And I was wondering how [and if] you\'ll bring Suguru into the Bad Luck picture.

Anyways! Wonderful chapter!
Can\'t wait for next sunday!^^


Ja ne~

Thanks for adding me to your emailing list ^__^ I found this chapter to be very funny with Yuki\'s dad dying because his son that he depended on turned out to be gay, which of course is great! Then Yuki saying that he had sex with guys as well, the finale should have been Tohma confessing, but in front of his wife and her mother might not have been smart if he had done that. Anyways, I am hoping that next Sunday will come fast so that I can read the next chapter to this wonderful story^__^ Keep up the good work!

Woo! Glad you finally updated. I admit I liked this chapter, but it was short (yeah, I\'m a complainer). Oh yeah, let\'s not forget that you left us with the image of a dead Uesugi and Yuki screwing Mikka(but hey, a man\'s gotta do what a man\'s gotta do). Oh welll, I still love you. Now...MORE!