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aww man! i cannot believe i missed chapter 5 update....*sniff* when i got the email about chapter six i was like \'wait! i haven\'t read five yet!\' oh well....i am really enjoying this fic. but please no more Eiri and Tohma....*shudders* i don\'t really like that pairing...and to tell you the truth i am pretty surprised about it and all...i actually like the idea of Tohma/Hiro. *grin* Please continue soon! i want more interaction with Yuki and Shu! Please! i\'ll be waiting :D

This chapter was perfect!!
I have to say i feel a little bad about Hiro and Shuichi I don\'t want them to fight *sniff*
I loved the scenes with Yuki becoming obssesive!!! but why doen\'t he just ask Tohma to see Shuichi?
I hope he does next chapter .

I love the way you write. Figurative language and all that jazz is great.
Gahaha...stupid women. They\'re either blind or (i think in Mika\'s case) in denial. What a shame their \"lover\'s\" don\'t want them.
Lol, kinda crazy the way Eiri just fell for Shuichi so suddenly. I guess it\'s kinda like what happened to Shuichi in the anime, eh?

To answer that question, I\'d prefer that you update Sunday mornings. They\'re unbelievably borrring.

Thanks!

-DP

I really liked the opening, Yuki\'s true colours are really showing... but then again I\'m thinking Onizuka deserved it! ^_^
Hiro\'s hesitency is almost understandable, overnight stardom is rather rare, but I also agree with Shuichi cause there\'s no way they can let this go; though Shuichi\'s answer was harsh: -

**“You would throw away our friendship over a music contract?” Hiro asked shocked, Shuichi looked at him intently, then looked away towards the window.

“Yes,” he responded barely above a whisper.** -

Yuki\'s obsessed... and so is Tohma, this is jus\' seems to be leading to a build up of sexual fustration... (that they can take out on each other) *hentai grin*

I\'m looking forward to the next chap!!! ^_^

hi-mi-tsu? whhhha? An I say update on Sunday Mornings!! :D this chapter was great. Love how Yuki is obsessed with Shuichi now. *gots to go cause she needs to pack her hang-lugage for tomorrow* ADORE this story.. need a Yuki/Shuichi lemon sooon! x-P

Coolsa.

(Ch. 6)

Oi! What a wonderful chapter!
Eiri\'s reaction to seeing Shu was perfect!^^
I just wonder.. I do agree with Mika; why would Eiri stay with someone he doesn\'t love, or even care for? Its not his style, no matter for how long he knew the girl before.

Also... I\'m sorry, but Shu was out of character, back after watching their video with Hiro. I just can\'t see Shu calling Hiro a \"motherfucker\". With or without beening pushed to a corner. [Forgetting the fact that he wasn\'t in the first place.]
Shu would have most likely comed about it shyly, and poke and Hiro tentivy. He\'s very strighat forward, yet so deliecate.
Hiro is his best friend, and most loved person; let us not forget that, ne?

But this chapter so kicked ass!!^^ I LOVED it!


Ummm.. I would prefer Sunday mornings for the one fact that its a more grounded time, besides having some random day in the week. ^^


Hope you get to updating soon, though! No matter what day!^^
I\'m hooked! ^_^U


Excellent chapter,
Ja ne~

Yet another awesome chapter! Love the cute little interaction between Hiro and Tohma with Hiro blushing!! ^___^ And the Yuki/Tohma action with Tohma saying Hiro\'s name.... niiiiiice!!!!! Fics like yours prove you can have an \"adult\" fic with all the sex we crave and still have a plot in there driving the story.

(Ch. 5)

First time I\'ve read a YukiXTohma lemon and enjoyed it.
And that, darling, says a lot. [*cough*compliment*cough*]

I hope you update soon,
This story really has potential.


Ja ne~

*Blushes*
That was hot!!! ^_~
I\'m adoring your character\'s, they\'ve still got the same personalities but in ways they are completely different people then from the manga\'s. Tohma/Eiri is a \'very\' interesting pairing but I\'ll definately like to see how Tohma/Hiro develops. ^-^
I\'m looking forward to reading about Yuki in the next chap!!! ^_^