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for Break Through

by Tairyn

person Dana
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a really hot scene between Eiri and Tohma and i usually avoid this pairing.
surprisingly,it was very easy to picture Tohma wearing a Metallica shirt and ripped jeans.
I can\'t wait until next chapter!!!
person dntfckwifme
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-squeak- Yuki and Tohma? I think m\'gunna throw up. O.o Gimme Yuki/Shuichi!! -throws a teddy at- and the next chapter is all bout Yuki, huh? -can\'t wait- ^^;; loving this. Awesome writer needs to update an soon!
person Haruna
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WAAA~~~ I DUN LIKE TOHMAxEIRI!! well, my fic does start with a little of TohmaXEiri BUT THAT\'S NOT MY POINT! I HOPE DIS IS DA LAST LEMON BETWEEN EIRI AND TOHMA! EIRI IS SHU1\'S PROPERTY AND SHU1 IS EIRI\'S PROPERTY! MUAH AH AH AH LONG LIVE EIRIxSHUICHI!! LONG LIVE EIRIxSHUICHI!! man... ever since i read your fic even i got attracted to Hiro. (hides Hiro pics under the bed)
person clarichan
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O i can tell u now that i\'m interested. Very interested. I hope that u update soon. I am really enjoying this. :D
person Hecate18
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! It\'s been a while hasn\'t it? I\'ve recently become obsessed with Gravitation and I stumbled upon this fic, so this is the first official Grav-fanfic I\'ve read. ^_^
It\'s different, but in a good way, each chap left me wanting to read more, I like the way you\'ve developed the plot, as well as the character\'s without making them OOC. I am looking forward to the next chap! ^^

~Hecate18~
person ladygizarme
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, just wanted to say i love this story! you write very well and your story seems very well thought out, which is very much appreciated. can\'t wait for more!
person Dana
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I liked that bit about Tatshua and that cute \"lovers quarrel\" between Hiro and Shuichi.
By the way i think it will be good if you include ASK in your fic,at least for a bit, don\'t dismiss them so quickly, because even though they\'re bastards and, like many others, i don\'t like them, the rivalry between the bands is a big part of the whole story not to mention the rising of Bad Luck.
please update soon i can\'t wait for next chapter
person dntfckwifme
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-points- Hitomi! Small world! o.o But yush! Ya fic. -noddles- \'tis awesome, well enjoying it. ~adored~ this chapter, was yums. Can\'t wait to see what happens at deh club! -grins- update soon! I await it!
person dntfckwifme
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mad? No, not at all. We had a differance of opinion, nothing to get all upset over. I\'m sure we\'ll both live. ^^ but your chapter! sweet. Just.. sweet. Loved it. And Tohma, *nods* and Yuki.. deh bomb. Just perfection. But!! tis 7am and I haffa hurry off to catch da bus to 6th Form (school).. so, I\'ll see you in your next fantastic chapter. I really enjoyed reading this, set me up for the day!
person Dana
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! i wasn\'t dissapointed at all! i kind of expecetd it\'d be Tohma . I liked how you portrayed him.
I hope you update soon!

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