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for Break Through

by Tairyn

person Hitomi
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O
I\'m stunned.

I HAVE TO read more.

Please update soon!



Ja ne~
person Lillian
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
really cool story! i can\'t wait for the future chapters! =P Please keep updating till the end. ^_^
person Haruna
schedule December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NNNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII???????????!!!!!!!!?????!!!!!!! MASAKA!! DON\'T TELL ME DAT TOHMA.... TOHMA IS.... IS.... OH PLEASE GOD FORBIDS IT! TOHMA IS IN.... IN.... I TOT TOHMA WILL ONLY AND ONLY LOVE EIRI RITE? RITE? I CAN UNDAZTAND DA PAIRING OF RYU AND HIRO, HIRO AND TATSU and... and... Eiri and Ryu.... BUT HIRO AND TOHMA???!??!??!?!??!?!?! DAT IS SOOO.... uh... WOAH!!

i dunno, what\'s u guys trying to write but it sounded to me dat Tohma have a something to Hiro and... uh... maybe it\'s not love but hey i wish u update soon, so dat i stop being in my sakano mood and honestly i really can\'t wait to read the next installment! da beginign of your chapter 3 really makes me wanna bang my head to my keyboard table, what does rubbing himself in front of his god meant? i understand lemon or lime situations but this one is really.... ugh! i hate it when i can\'t solve it! please tell more of shu\'s past~ if u keep making it a secret its making me ripping my hair off!! and i will rip myself bold if u dun post da next chapter soon! so.... ... beware hee hee hee hee
person Tsuki
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You started good, then it falters.

The whole thing about Yuki reading/writing manga.. yeah. I know it\'s an A/U, but come on.

The fangirl Japanese is a bit annoying, too. But that\'s something all fanfiction seems to have nowadays.

It was a good plot. Was.
person Dana
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story Shuichi is so cute!
I can\'t wait for the next chapter!!
person Harper
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! PLEASE UPDATE SOOONN!!!! I THINK IMMA GO THROUGH WITHDRAWL IF U DONT!
person dntfckwifme
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Plain and simple. You need to update soon. I can\'t belive more people haven\'t reviewed. *thumbs up* awesome work.
person OrangeJuice
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww, man, I love AU fics! I can\'t wait until the next installment, and I can\'t believe I\'m the only one who\'s reviewed this...Maybe you just posted it...? I dunno. If I am the only one, then you definitely deserve more than just this! Anyway, good writing, very cool. I like how you depict the characters. This fic is a little nerdy at times, but I suppose that\'s what you\'re going for. Anyway, I can handle it. My friends act like that everyday >.<

Oh, but hurry up with the Yuki/Shu-ness. I can\'t wait.

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