rate_review Reviews

please.
not

another 3 months.

or 2 months.

aaah

I seriously can't last that long.

you don't even know. I m like obsessed.. not that its a porblem. but chyea.

No,...you are not boring he at all, and besides...i would like to hear more about Yuki and Shuichi. I would just want them to get together again and all because the suspense is killing me. You should keep on going and besides,...you are not running out of song titles. Here is a list of song titles from Gravitation that you haven\'t used yet;
Lost Complex
Liquid Brain
Rain
Hypnotic Distortion
Time in my Heart
Angel Dust
Love Stuff
Blood
No! Virtual
Fake Star
Recollection
First Demention
Easy Action
Power Cave

See...there is a good 14 or 15 chapters right there.

yay, i finally had time to catch up since i read it last!! (it\'s been MONTHS) woot, things are getting crazy dude! freakin love hexagons goin on or somethin lol...it\'s awesome, i like ^__^ i hope shu and yuki come to their senses soon though... esp cuz mikka\'s hella annoying! aiyaa!! as for what to do about the next chapter, i vote for the longer one, as long as there\'s more to it than just the hot springs trip... i\'m definitely one for long stories with looong chapters ^__~ hope you update soon, regardless of your decision!

Chpt 21: Wow.. this has been an amazing story (I spent 3 hours rereading before reading the next chapter to remember all of the intrigue!). Poor shu this is his section but he never gets any Yuki! I *love* the masturbation scenes.. very cool and almost never done and when done not nearly as well written as those! I am not sure what the say about the hot springs.. if Shu is going to show up somehow so he and Yuki can have some type of meeting at the Hot Springs then go for 40 pages.. otherwise 20 pages if its just Mikka.. btw i love how you make Yuki screwing Mikka such a chore - I think thats very realistically written!.. Please update soon!

As of now I\'ve only gotten halfway through, but I\'ve got to tell you, this is the best Gravi fic ever. EVER .

And I\'ve read a lot of them so I should know.

I usually hate origional characters, but yours are so great! I can see now why you put in Mikka Costa as Eiri\'s fiance instead of Ayaka. Ayaka is a girl with a crush and Mikka is a woman in love with a fiance who doesn\'t desire her, which makes it all the more tragic. She\'s my favorite orgional character out of any orgional characters I have ever read about. I suppose its because I sypathize with her deeply; My situation is somewhat the same as hers.

jaja. oh wow...esp..thats funny. But for a moment i thought that Yuki was having a dream of Shuichi exactly how he was in the bathroom masturbating. I was like whoa..how can he see that..until you mentioned that he was on a bed and i was like ohhh. I can\'t wait for a real interaction between Yuki and Shuichi though. Doesn\'t necessarily have to be the tasty and mouth watering smut but at least some speech or face to face interaction. Please continue :D

Oh come on! It is lovely, but I can\'t wait to see Yuki and Shu together (for real) again ;)

Yes do both, I cant wait to read them since I like this story and am eagerly awaiting when Shuichi and Yuki get back together

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... that\'s a hard one. But, I\'m gonna have to choose B.

This story is so incredibly good! Can you at hint the ending? [hehehe... wait... don\'t tell me the ending, I wanna read on and see.]

Please update soon.

Love,

Maplecherry

Wow.. I don\'t know where to begin! This fic is AMAZING! You are such a GREAT writer! I do have to admit that I am reading this really for ShuxYuki and I want them to get back together damnit NOW.. your just torturing the poor boys! I think your Ryu is very scary.. I love it! He is after what he wants.. the thing about \"yes I want to have sex with you very badly\" was the *BEST* that is HILLARIOUS! I can not WAIT for the next few chapters so that SxY get back together! Argh.. that has to be some really hot sex after all of this angst! I just love how you had Shu save himself for yuki and now be all angsty and disollusioned.. just don\'t let Ryu get to him first! Please update soon!