rate_review Reviews

I just love your story! I love absolutely everything about it!!!!!!

It\'s not that I\'m bored or anything, it\'s really good and I enjoy reading it, I just usually happen to read late at night, which just happens to be my only free time most of the time, and I get too tired to even think straight let alone review, so don\'t take it personally. Yes, I\'m going to ask for Yuki/Shu action, which will hopefully come in the upcoming chapter seeing as you said \'triple the lemon\'. And all I can think of, that is if you don\'t do repeats is of course Ryu/Tat and Hiro/Tohma then of course the infamous Yuki/Shu^__~ Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!

To answer your question, I, for one, am not getting bored of the story. Though I have to say I\'m getting tired of it. There\'s a lof of plot there and a LOT of pairings, but in the beginning you started this as a Yuki/Shuichi fic and that\'s what people are expecting.

All the other stories revolving around the support pairings would be perfect as side stories or fillers but when there\'s too much of it and not enough of the declared \"main pairing\" (which in this case it would be Yuki/Shuichi) it seems as if you\'re just drawing it out without a good reason. It\'s very tiring to read about Suguru\'s problem with Tatsuha for most of the chapter when you\'re just ACHING to know when Yuki and Shuichi will finally deal with it all.

If you\'re writing this as just a standard \"fifty plus chapters soap opera\" fic then I feel extremely dissapointed. This has SO MUCH potential, it\'s insane. You write well and you characterize like magic, your descriptions are also in the pro category. Some people would kill just to be able to write emotions this well. The only problem I can see is your focus...

I\'m not getting bored, promise. Though it does seem to be true that people review less with each chapter...

Anyway, I did like this chapter, I like the clues and the different relationships and such going on through this story and I\'m a slow mover, I like building up to the relationship--as if it were real life almost. So I like how you write this and the pace you have it at, so please don\'t change it.

Until the next chapter,

--Dhampir

no i love it
keep going at your own pace
that just makes it better in the end
i just get the creeps whenever i read of ryu being near shu
y? because he creeps me out
yuki was gonna kill himself back then?
wow didnt even guess
o poor shu what a complicated life so far.
update soon.

Kisra:Yes damn you! More Yuki and Shuichi!

Yami:*sigh* Kis-chan, calm down.

Kisra:No! I want more Tohma and Hiro! Yuki and Shuichi!

Yami:My sister is a nut so excuse her.

Kisra:I am not! I just want more loving from my favorite couple

Yami:Which makes you an even bigger nut.

Kisra:Whatever you bastard. I wuv your story but I want more Tohma/Hiro and Shu/Yuki fluff and lemons! Please!

Yami:Oh yeah the Mikka Costa thing sorta pisses me off.

Kisra:Why?

Yami:Cause the way I see it, she\'s a girl who thinks she has everything, the perfect everything and she hasn\'t come to terms with reality. As Shuichi has said in volume 8 I think it was \"Reality is only a nice way of saying tragedy.\"

Kisra:That was funny. I thought he was acting like a depressed idiot when he said that.

Yami: I know. Anyway we love ya story so keep going.

I love your story. It\'s why I read Gravitation AU. The only thing to conplain about is your updateing. TOITMOREOFTEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh about the Yuik/Shuichi get together, don\'t rush it. They both have major issues to sort out. It might be fun if you have Mikka go insane and try to kill Shuichi at the end. Then Yuik can rescue him and Mikka is in a mental hospital and out of the way for Shuichi. And as easy as it would be if Mika gave up without a fight, it would be more entertaining if she didn\'t. Tohma/Hiro is a pair I don\'t really see but here it works. Please make a happy ending for the yaoi pairs. That includes Ryuichi/Tatsuha. I like how you have them interacting in this. I love this fic. UPDATESOON!!!!!!!!

I love this story but, *sighs* yes it is taking too long in regards to getting Shuichi and Yuki back together. Its a little painful watching them dance around each others feelings. As for the titles mixes are fine or you can just use titles of other songs that fit the situation.

I don\'t think I have reviewed your story in a long time. Even though i have not reviewed in a while do know that your story is one of the only Gravitation up dates that I look forward too. I can not wait until the next chapter, hopefully you will update it soon. Keep up the good work because I am LOVING what you have done so far. I have even reread it like five times. So please don\'t gie up on this story.

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Three lemons in the next chapter? @ @;; Woah! *bounces* I can\'t wait now! ^-^ Oh ho ho! The plot tickens! Yuki was suicidal at that time? T-T NOOOO! Poor baby! *snuggles* Update soon please! *gives you cookies* Your story is the best! X3