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AN) Though this fic is essentially me plunging into the depths of Satoshi\'s mind for my own fascination, I am pleased if others like it as well. On the other hand, those who have graded this fic below standard I would like to request that if you do so, leave a review behind telling me why you didn\'t like it. Considering there are so many fics out there rated the full 5 stars that are actually rubbish, I find it extremely irritating being smashed down and yet not told why. Please do so, it would be greatly appreciated. I ask this not so I can flame you back, because I won\'t, but so I can correct anything I may be doing wrong, if it is me that is in the wrong. If you simply don\'t like where I am taking this series and what I am doing with it than bear in mind that you should read the warnings that are up for this fic. Though there is nothing truly graphic inside it as I prefer subtlety over crass over-writing. Thank you.

the story is awesome-but the damn chapters need to be longer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow that was good. Are you going to hook up Daisuke with Satoshi?

hmm... i really like this, just as introspective and self-loathing as you\'d expect from satoshi. but i\'m left wondering 2 things; who did he break in part1 and what happened to daisuke, who did he \'loose\' him to?

oh, and if you\'re looking for a beta, i\'m more than willing.