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for Broken Dreams

by CardDragonBall

person yume1122
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*demonic cackling laughter*

wow. u're as evil as me. ^_^
person eMu3
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i liked this chapter a lot. you did a good job keeping it in canon, and still making it enjoyable. which is weird because that is a goofy-ass show and your story...isn\'t goofy. you even used those stupid bee and honey lines without making them terrible! yay for you! and i like that insight into aya and the wanting aya-chan dead thing. as a deep dark desire of course, but still, very nift idea...can\'t wait for the next chappie! ^-^

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