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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it. But it was so short *cries* I hope you\'ll continue or write some other VF Fanfic, I do like your writing style ^^! So keep going
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, a viewfinder fic! Didn\'t think anybody wrote fanfics for yaoi manga. You did a good job with this one, Asami didn\'t seem out of character at all. The only thing that bugged me a little is that your perspective of Fei Long seems a bit off to me; he and Asami didn\'t have a real \"relationship\" and from the way Yamane-sensei portrays Asami with Fei Long in \"Flower on the High Loft\" (ch5-6), I somehow doubt Asami had any romantic feelings for him. Anyways, great fic and I hope you write another one soon!