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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Please, update it soon *puppy dog eyes*
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was incredible please update
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s so great, I love it!!
But please, update soon! :D
But please, update soon! :D
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January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU MUST WRITE MORE!!!! THERE\'S NOT ENOUGH TOHMAxSUGURU IN THE WORLD, WITH A LEMON WRIITEN THIS WELL!!! AN AMATEUR??? UR LIKE A PRO!!!!
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January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good beginning! Oh poor Suguru, only if Touma knew how he felt towards him, maybe it wouldn\'t be loveless sex! Well anyway update soon!!!
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December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i don\'t know what possessed me to read this...incest is not usually my thing. maybe it\'s that this particular family is so fucked up that incest seems plausible...at any rate, i do like the way you wrote suguru and tohma\'s reactions. tohma mentally calling suguru a slut when he snuck in there to seduce him was just perfect. it\'s such a psycho tohma thing to do. this should be an interesting read. i think you\'ve got their family down pretty well (btw, for all the talk i do about how fucked up they are, i absolutely love tohma and suguru, i think they\'re really funny! i like \'em crazy!)
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December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. =)
I\'m sure it was just because it was a beginning, but I think the lemon scenes should bea tad more drawn out and with more vivid and descriptive words in the future. Nevertheless, from what I read you are a great author with potential. Hope to read more of this and other stories from you.
I\'m sure it was just because it was a beginning, but I think the lemon scenes should bea tad more drawn out and with more vivid and descriptive words in the future. Nevertheless, from what I read you are a great author with potential. Hope to read more of this and other stories from you.