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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a very good story, its so hard to find stories that are this good almost anywhere. Keep writing stories, I'll keep reading.
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This fic is one of the best I've read, and I thankyou for writing it and brightening the fanfiction world. I look forward to any other fics you decide to write.
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was one Awesome Story, so dark, so sad, so evil. You should make an Epilogue to this story to tie up some loose ends.
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its been over a year now since the last update, but I insist apoun you, the author to continue, and follow through with what you started if you still can, what you have here is a wonderful story, that is extremely detailed and in depth, if your reading this yes, it is both a positive review, and a plea, for you to continue this.
-Coconut
The Origional
-Coconut
The Origional
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good story.
Keep up the good work, and I look forward to the next chapter.
Keep up the good work, and I look forward to the next chapter.
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All i can really say is: Wow.
Im really impressed by your writing style and how you build up an origional story using basically only the characters and basic physics of an unorigional world. Im trying to write a story from complete scratch and so far its not turning out too well. I'll reread this story if i find myself written into a corner. Though there are some spots where it seems youve done that, you seem to know how to pull it out.
Im really impressed by your writing style and how you build up an origional story using basically only the characters and basic physics of an unorigional world. Im trying to write a story from complete scratch and so far its not turning out too well. I'll reread this story if i find myself written into a corner. Though there are some spots where it seems youve done that, you seem to know how to pull it out.
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story but I wanna know more of the beginning of this story so I can understand it some more. If you want e-mail me at JTB8834@aol.com so you can help fill in the blanks for me and refresh my memory about who everyone is ..... It would be much obliged if you did that and great writing anf hope to see an update
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG Great story. Loved how you made ash a bad ass. hope u can finish it soon
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...wow. Okay, this is easily going on my rec. list. I'm seriously at a loss of words. It's just... damn. *govels and bows profusely*
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!
*breathe* *breathe*
Look... I can't believe it ...
*crying*
why did you stop?
Are you trying to kill me?
*hiccup*
UPDATE ALREADY!
*wiping the rivers of snot and tears from face*
DON'T
LEAVE
ME
HANGING
*breathe* *breathe*
Look... I can't believe it ...
*crying*
why did you stop?
Are you trying to kill me?
*hiccup*
UPDATE ALREADY!
*wiping the rivers of snot and tears from face*
DON'T
LEAVE
ME
HANGING