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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're pretty good. Though I find it mildly disturbing how easily Ash and Misty get along after that letter. Also, that Misty gets jelous so easily while being able to forgive herself so quickly paints a really shallow picture of her.
But wow, it's the best work I've seen in Pokemon for a while
But wow, it's the best work I've seen in Pokemon for a while
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome work, i really enjoyed it!
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10 delivers an astounding plot.
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you have a great story going on and i can\'t wait to see how the battles are going to unfold.
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY PWNS A ACTUAL GOOD ASS POKEMON FIC KEEP GOING DEAR GOD I READ ALL 10 CHAPS IT WAS SO GREAT!!!
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o.O; So how come Erika is siding with the bad guys? She never struck me as the type to go bad.
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very good, i know mewtwo died in the previous chapters, but perhaps you could have him return having somethign to do with the crystal of nine, perhaps having sabrina and mewtwo link? or having ash also gain mewtwo\'s power, in the end having a massive psychokenetic battle for the survival of the planet!!!!! mwah hahahahaha! er, right, anyway, greta job, keep it up, looking forward to the next instalment.
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The Pain! PLZ UPDATE!! MY HEAD IS GOING IN TO MADNESS THIS STORY IS SOME KICK ASS STUFF IT LIKE A DAM DRUG!! UPDATE OR I WILL MAKE U A SLAVE AND FINISH IT. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO!!!! No more chapters!!! -starts foaming at the mouth- need update....
Great story, love the whole Crystal of Nine and Pikachu\'s secret moves. It\'s a great story, I love it. ou better update or I\'ll send a thunder bomb on you. -imagines the prospects of a Pokemon: Elamental coming out-
Great story, love the whole Crystal of Nine and Pikachu\'s secret moves. It\'s a great story, I love it. ou better update or I\'ll send a thunder bomb on you. -imagines the prospects of a Pokemon: Elamental coming out-
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this has to be the best story i have ever read...update soon or my eyes shall explode from their sockets