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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
exciting & breath-taking.I hope the next chapter would be updated really soon.
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man awesome story.Ive read the one on FF.net though and i see you hve corrected some mistakes but do make some changes and also continue the sequel story.The Replicate one.I want Ash out of Prison.Oh and also the one with Ash and Gary against TR after Leaving it.Jus continue plz
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey I think I\'ve read your story before... well the non-hentai version of it. I got it when the Pokemon Tower was still going it\'s the only one I still have since my computer crashed some time ago. I\'m glad to see it again.
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is an interesting fanfiction & I would like to know when is chapter five is going to be updated.
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice fic, but i wish you\'d finish it. if you need a beta or anything i\'m here. just finish it already. geez.
later,
chris
later,
chris
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I like how you made Ash seem stable, I mean he sounds awesome in this story and I hope you add more chapters soon, I can\'t wait to read more of this story
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the coolest stories i have ever read and that is a true so hurry up with some more chapters.
Finish this story quickly it\'s to good for cliffy\'s.
Finish this story quickly it\'s to good for cliffy\'s.
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s a great story, finish it would ya? ur leaving far too many ppl hanging. if u need a beta i\'m here, but like i said, far too many ppl are drooling over this one for u to just stop there.
later,
chris
later,
chris
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finish it maaaaan!! its guut!!!
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah. Man, talk about intense. I do hope you\'ll be continuing this story. It\'s really great. Hope Ash and Misty get together. Looking forward to reading more.