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O.O weeeeeee!!!! Good not so clean fun!!!

Dude, you\'re evil. How the hell could you wright a story where Ash is such a total bad ass and then leave us hanging like that?! Hurry up and finish this already!

I like this story idea. Sometimes you could be a little more descriptive, though. Still, it is good.

coolsa.

This is one of the few stories I\'ve read that has a real plot going for it. That was a nice touch, having Ash recite the letter Misty wrote to him, and having Misty umknowningly engaged to a rocket. I look forward to the future chapters. Chao.

~Akewataru~

Totally awesome! Wow, it\'s so wonderful to have an interesting, well written dark fic on here! You\'re writing is fantastic, I love what you have so far, even though The Team Rocket takes over the world thing is overly used. You do a great job of making it your own. Once again, great work, I look foward to reading more! Yay! Good luck on here by the way, I was kicked off of fanfiction.net, for obvious reasons, but their lose. People here appreciate me, and other authors who write well, and write dark and sexual fics. Good luck!