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Waaaaaaaaah, where's the new chapter? This is the only FF I have in my favorites. ; ;!

Been reading this for a while now. Liked that most, if not all of them, had some very interesting stories to tell. In fact, some of them were heartbreaking for me to stop reading though.

Who is next in the lineup? Kyoko? Yui? An OC? I do want to see a Section 2 agent that turned out to be someone who Shinji was not able to remember in the past life.

You know, it'd be cool to bee another anime based on this kind of story setup, maybe the Gundam SEED series, but I think someone's trying to pull that off.

Yea! Hope to see this updated soon!

your Mistake was killing Mana, ya not chibi git!

I really liked all of your stories, coolness all around. I know what its like to have all these pseudo-AUs of different animes running through your head. I tried to get them down on paper, but they turned out way too fragmented. But yours? Excellent. superbly written. Praise to all I look forward to anything else you write.
Oh, also, the story with Mana in it? You talked about the aftermath, and imagining how Shinji would freak out. I thought about him tearing around Tokyo-3 in Unit-01, getting all demony and fighting Rei and Asuka when they try to stop him. Then making like Carrie and go all Telekinetic and ripping people apart while stalking the halls of Nerv. I know he can\'t do that, but still, thats what i say in my mind\'s eye. huh, need to stop watching Elfen Lied and Akira.
Peace.

A good story! Sad that Rei left, she and Shinji make such a great couple

Why do you say that tomatoes will be thrown for the Kari chapter!? I liked it ^^;;; very much so actually. I would love to see that become a multi-chapter story.

Great short stories you got here(five out of five). I really like your style of writing, though you haven\'t updated in over a month, I still can\'t wait for your next chapter, so send me an email when you post a new one up. laters.

i just read chapter 12, and yes the question is really diffecult. I believe that Mana was right coming back, but Shinji was also right to force her out because she left himn without a simgle word for years. And finally Rei made a great sacrifice. I think the correct one would be Mana accepting that she was wrong and allow Shinji, who has now moved on, lead a happy life with Rei. (BTW i love ShinjiRei pairing but i did tried my best to judge this)

good story

while i can see why you had them do some of those things i think you did some very unrealistic things just to get the right level of darkness in the storys you wanted.

Things like killing Mana in the first story with her is just unrealistic you don\'t EVER kill a spy if you can help it at all as far as that goes if you do capture them you send them to a hospital to make see that they don\'t die spys are to valuble to trade at a later time and also shoting someone that one of the only people that has a real chance of saving the world said if you shot her i wont fight anymore is just like o my god level stupid.

Next thing of this is the angle that they had I already forgot what you named her but it did end well I liked how she woke up then but how fing stupid are these people to kill that angle before they atleast try to talk to it and find out intell about the enemy would get who ever ordered that thrown in jail and more then likly exicuted the kind of intell that angle could give could change the whole war. I do agree that she would of been good to chop up and examin but killing her before you have had a chance to try to get info out of her is just criminal stupid not to mention what kind of idiots would leave her in the room right beside one of the childeren so he can see the nice dead angle man that is just stupid lol

Lastly the other mana fic where she came back i was fine with it till i read the part where rei left that just sucked man