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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, let me tell you, i\'ve been following your stories, i\'ll call them stories not fics since this eva universe you\'ve created is practically your own and I commend you for it!
Secondly, the stories your right are with essence, written with spirit and feeling unlike some others that exist out there.
This chapter, Paradise has got to be one of the saddest i\'ve read yet since Mistakes.
Those two fics actually put me to tears and i\'ll be honest THAT NEVER HAPPENS! But you made it happen and that must mean one thing, you are a great writer with alot of potential. As a writer myself, I just want to say thank you, you\'re an inspiration to the world and I ask you to continue writing, for yours is a talent that not everyone has.
Your stories have the power to make people feel and think, and your storeis only have that power because you gave it that power, so Good Luck, may you have eternal happiness!
Secondly, the stories your right are with essence, written with spirit and feeling unlike some others that exist out there.
This chapter, Paradise has got to be one of the saddest i\'ve read yet since Mistakes.
Those two fics actually put me to tears and i\'ll be honest THAT NEVER HAPPENS! But you made it happen and that must mean one thing, you are a great writer with alot of potential. As a writer myself, I just want to say thank you, you\'re an inspiration to the world and I ask you to continue writing, for yours is a talent that not everyone has.
Your stories have the power to make people feel and think, and your storeis only have that power because you gave it that power, so Good Luck, may you have eternal happiness!
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that cold man. I like the way you write you angst and keep on going with the bittersweet endings. Hope you update soon man. once a month is not quick enough (but i\'ll wait for a great chapter, like the last one. It\'s good)
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you did the right thing by having Rei leave. It seems like something she would do. Although, I still hate Mana for what she did. Although, I think you could lessen the blow by having Rei send a letter to Shinji everyonce in a while. Continue to amaze us with Shinji\'s great exploits.
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Regardless of one\'s morals, that is a sad ending... I mean, in a different light, it might\'ve been happier... But...I don\'t know. This was another great chapter, and only one or two mistakes spotted. I can see that you have a love for the angst. I hope to see more, but would it kill ya to give Shinji a happy ending? Well, I loved the nobility Rei showed... So, when\'s Asuka gonna get it?
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you suck.
write more pls.
i love you.
write more pls.
i love you.
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, one of the best yet.
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm so are all of these just a one on one thing or will shinji get a three-some. If he\'s lucky enough maybe somehting odd with Hikari and Rie or Nozomi Horaki and Mari Suzuhara.... hmmm the joy
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That last chapter was one of the most depressing things I\'ve ever read. Right before I went to bed too. Damn :( Oh well, still great stuff, can\'t wait for more.
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The Chapter Paridise.
A bittersweet chapter and very well written Congrats!
A bittersweet chapter and very well written Congrats!
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
..... I think I\'ll sum my review in one word, taken from the scene of End of Evangelion directly after Shinji strangles the imaginary Asuka.
The word is, speechless.
Please disregard that Shinji screams his head off afterward
The word is, speechless.
Please disregard that Shinji screams his head off afterward