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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Chibi, It\'s god again.
Just wanted to tell you that Jesus approves of your work, and wonders why the fuck you write these things online,
Go right a book dude, filled with hentai-esque stories =D
Send the first copy to me, autographed.
Update soon! ^________^
Just wanted to tell you that Jesus approves of your work, and wonders why the fuck you write these things online,
Go right a book dude, filled with hentai-esque stories =D
Send the first copy to me, autographed.
Update soon! ^________^
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE! PLEASE UPDATE, so you can rescue me from the horror that is Shinji\'s Nightmare Cataclysm!!! PLEASE!!!
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OoOoO u gotta do a sequel to this one
like the pairing
nicely done
like the pairing
nicely done
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is prob my fav chap you\'ve written
liked aya u did a good job with her char the rape thing was a bit wierd at first but easy to get passed
Very well writen hope for more excelent chaps like this soon
liked aya u did a good job with her char the rape thing was a bit wierd at first but easy to get passed
Very well writen hope for more excelent chaps like this soon
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, your stories are getting better in each chapter. In the last chapter was the time for the teacher, so this means that the last ACC will be the section 2 agent. And there will be a chapter for Yui, Kyoko, Mayumi and Rei, this mean that this fic will be over in the chapter 16 or will be another chapters ?
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11 was interesting in a rather bizzare way
I look forward to more
DarkSoul~
I look forward to more
DarkSoul~
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i must admit you are exclent at portraying charcters and making your own waiting with baited breath for the rei chapters and anyothers you come up with. although i do wonder if more of the minor charcters like hikaris sisters will show up and i would like to see another mana chapter she hast to be my favorite charcter even if she is under appriceated
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, can\'t be quite sure on how I feel about this one. On one hand, I don\'t the casual dismissal of rape, but I suppose that the reality of it would have faded with Shinji\'s amnesia. I do however admire your creativity and ability to give a one chapter character a personality.
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aya was a cool character and the other characters where Ic. just that the plot itself was a bit odd... i cant fathom a 10 year in a sexual relationship... especially with a 16 year old girl... just seems very improbable to me. but putting that aside this was real good!
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome stuff here. Great job!