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i effing hate you. you make the txt smut i wrote feel like poo.

i\'ll be expecting a real waff/wet rei-chan chapter soon.

merci.

Ch.11 was very good and the subject of the story didn\'t bother me becuz it was done very well. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.

Lol, I havnt really reviewed up until now, but your stories are the best, I swear it. I\'d put my fics up here, but noone ever really reviewed, so I wasnt that shook on it. =\\ So I thought if I didnt let yo uknow, it\'d be the whole \"I wouldnt like it if it was done to me!\" lol. But that aside, you\'ve got great fics. ^^

Wow. That was a bit...different. I believe that Shinji would take any affection he can get, so his reactions seem real enough to me. Well done as usual.

You are such an awesome writer. I\'m holding my breath so hard for your Shinji/Rei one-shot. And crossing my fingers in hopes that it\'s next.

This is easily one of the best series of Evangelion Lemon fics I\'ve ever read. The latest chapter was quite refreshing since it featured an Angel (other than Kaworu or Rei). You did have me going at the end since I thought Arael would die like Mana did. But I guess one should never underestimate an Angel, right?
On a side note, Shadowed Moon may have read this series wrong- from my understanding, each of the chapters is a story in itself and almost totally unconnected with each other like a series of one-shots.

Hey man! this chapter was cool, wanna know if you will make a second part.

GOGOGOGO!!!!

I\'m at chapter five and I felt that this was a good place to stop and review. I must say that this fic isn\'t too bad, considering the shit that appears here at AFF. I liked how deeply you portrayed the characters and developed the story, making this a couple of steps above being just another pornfic. Now, it isn\'t exactly a perfect fic. The most notable problem here is the grammatical, spelling, and punctual mistakes. I recommend a good beta-reader to fix that, hell, E-mail me sometime and I\'LL be your beta.. Oh, and this particular chapter made me sad, the ending was expected, but it still hit me pretty hard. If I were a little down, I might\'ve cried. I guess it needed to happen to make logical sense with your established storyline, but I still wished that Mana didn\'t end up like that...

Chapter 7 is...interesting. I didn\'t dislike it, and I suppose I get your angle, but I didn\'t see it coming. When you consider the premise, it\'s kinda cute, how this chapter was executed. Satsuki isn\'t as brazen as you you wrote her, but eh, it\'s an Eva fic. At least no tears in this one.

I liked this chapter very much, especially the protrayal of the angel. I was a little worried towards the end, though, cause I thought that you\'d kill off the Arael. You\'re right, I did expect another \"Mana\" to happen. I wonder, though, what\'s to become of Arael? I mean, it would be great to see her as the one that Shinji\'d end up with, but your timeline doesn\'t seem to have room for that (from the looks of it, he ultimately ends up with Mari).