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Awww... the only person he hasn\'t screwed is poor Rei!!! Think you could make it work? Youve done a great job with the made up characters- very cool! Me likes :-D

Many thanks for the reviews everyone. I\'m really really thankful that people are even reading. ^_^

To answer a review that was recently left, I do plan on doing a Mayumi chapter and Kyoko chapter. Kyoko\'s would probably be Shinji doing something via Unit 02 -> Kyoko and Mayumi\'s will basically be a rehash of the game since most people don\'t even know her character. I already planned on doing the teacher chapter too. The only chapters I\'m really unsure of are Nozomi\'s and Yui\'s.

The only named female character I can\'t see happening is Naoko. Thankfully, I didn\'t exactly hear from any Naoko fans yet. ^_^; Also, a kind person sent an email and I would like to clarify that I am trying hard on Rei\'s chapter. It\'s just difficult for me seeing that it is the hardest paring for me to write decently.

I have some other stories to update/finish also so I might get a bit more laid back on this for a while.

Again I would like to thank every reviewer and reader.

CF

Just asking: will you do a chapter with Mayumi Yamagishi from second impresion game? And about Asuka\'s mother Kyoko, will she, in some way, apear in a chapter too? and since we are talking about mothers what about Yui and Naoko? And finishing, i believe that cold have an chapter where Shinji would be with a female teacher, since you are using ACCs.

I just read Chapter 9, \"Remembrance,\" and I have decided this is worthwhile.

Ritsuko is probably my single favorite character from NGE. And you made it in character and almost believable for her to have sex with Shinji. I\'m impressed.

Mind you, I\'m not sure Shinji is in character here. Even for teenage boys, in mourning != horny. Shinji howling in rage and throwing himself at the Mass Production EVAs, then self-destructing when his power levels ran out, would be in character. This \"Hmm, the woman who deflowered me, the one true love of my life and the only reason I don\'t stick my head in the oven, is dying if not already dead. I know, I\'ll fuck her best friend!\" isn\'t. I don\'t think even Kaji would do that.

Nonetheless the sex is hot, and anything with Ritsu gets bonus points from me, unless she is, you know, crazy or dying or something.

So, ten out of ten for style, minus several million for credible characterization, +10 Ritsu bonus.

Very good, you need the next chapter to finish/ continue with the same charicters and parings seemd like it wasn\'t over with them, so continue with this chapter 10 idea, worked well, although you could have wrote a seperate story for this chapter, oh well it was very good none the less, I loved it

Once again, you win the internet! :D
That was incredibly hot. o:

Forgot to mention I really liked the character of Areal. The original character design you made I think worked much better than if you used a female version of Koaru.

DAMN, you\'re a really good writer. I wish i was half as good as you. Anyways, MAKE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well, i could keep that up but you get the idea. :-P

What a twist. At first I thought it a little odd that the angel be the love intrest in chapter 10, but after I started reading into it I loved it, and I know these are one shots but I would love it if you could continue this one. Anyway hope to read more of your great work soon.

Interesting, although I prefer some of the earlier ones. My one complaint is how would an angel -in the flesh for the first time- know how to do any of that. Please keep writing.
PS: Why is this called \'Nightshift\' ?