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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good one. Smooth as silk. A couple of errors though: snuggly should be \"snugly\", tolerate of other should be \"tolerant of another\", and a couple of others I\'ve forgotten. Keep \'em coming and thanks.
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This one was really good. the things that were out just added to the interest i had in it. i think it was loads of fun to read and kind of had me scratching my head thinking is he gonna stay or go to Asuka.. but i liked it alot!
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow these little story\'s have become more intresting as the come along, the ones that have become my fave. is the one with the good ol dr. and the angel, 2 unigue characters both origonal that can captivate anyone. keep up the good stuff ...(ps. i rarely review :) take it as ur stuff is good )
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good so far, although you couldof ignored the Dr. Acagi or however you spell it lol but then again I supose then it wouldent be all the femele chariters then whould it lol but very good
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A Shinji/Ritsuko fic?
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HAVE WON THE INTERNET!
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YOU SIR...
HAVE WON THE INTERNET!
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A bit sad fic, but it was good too. Two things that really stood out in this one is that Shinji made the move, not Ritsuko, and that there was actually a plausible reason for Shinji being good at sex. Is this the end of the fic, or is there going to be more?
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your stroies are great man. I love them all! Think you can make more of Ritsuko?
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Friction and the last chapter were great. Your stories are really good at getting in depth with characters feelings and how they react. It makes each and every one of your chapters great not to mention you kept them all pretty original.
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic. It is refreshing to see a lemon fic with realistic boundaries. Keep up the excellent work.
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you are doing pretty good, i like even the histories with ACCs, the only that i disliked, was the one with Asuka, but you said that wold do another, so how about one like that in chapter 8, in this Shinji wold discover that Asuka would do everything to maintain her position as a pilot, even becoming comander\'s whore. Well this is just a sugestion, if you dont like its alright.