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good chapter
hint at misato/shinji like that pairing
but akagi and shinji always wanted to see a fic in either here or norm ffnet with that pairingand u did good job

Chapter 9 was really impressive.

Many hi\'s everyone.

I had to leave a review to show my gratitude for all of the support I\'m getting for my series of one shots. I read every review thus far and I would like to thank everyone who gave their time to type a review. Even if it\'s merely support, construtive critisim, or just to let me know you liked it, all of the reviews motivate me to become better.

I know the \'Role fill characters\' like Classmate and Technician take second place to people who were actually in the series like Mari and Kodama who have priority taken from them by characters like Rei and Misato. Don\'t worry about Rei, she\'ll get two chapters just like Asuka will seeing they are the most popular characters. ^_^

Man, I\'m just glad people are reading my stuff.

Alright, once again many thanks for reading and reviewing everyone.

...I have a mole under my eye. *shivers*

I liked this chapter a lot. You did right in adjusting Shinji\'s dialogue. One of the easy mistakes when writing is frantically including everything because you\'re afraid that it won\'t be absolutely clear. In life things aren\'t absolutely clear. People don\'t say every thought in their head in one long monologue. You did very well.

Wow, have to say I\'m a little awestruck by the Ritsuko chapter. I don\'t think I have the proper words in my head to express how much I liked it. Looking forward to next one.

Nice vignette series you have here. Only one thing wrong with it though. You said it would be a fic with Shinji\'s \"various encounters with the female cast of Evangelion,\" yet, contrary to what this had implied, you haven\'t given Rei Ayanami, one of the intrinsic trinity of evangelion females in the series, proper recognition as being a MAIN CHARACTER. Rei has yet to be given the spotlight once. You\'ve had all canon evangelion girls sans the old lady Kaji spoke to, a character from Ichigo 100%, and even an ACC, but not Rei! Where is she in all of this? I believe I remember seeing her a lot more than Mari. I just can\'t understand how she isn\'t a \"cast\" member before Satsuki or Kari.

I understand deviation from a fic as much as the next fickle author, but what do you have against everybodies favorite enigmatic azure-albino anyway?

PS: I realise how antogonistic this made me sound and I just wanted to mention that I\'m not trying to be hostile in any way, shape, or form. I was just expressing some slight indignation on behalf of Rei there. :p

Ch. 8 and 9 are both really good and I enjoyed them a lot. I was trying to think of who hadn\'t been in a story yet and I could only think of Rei. I\'m sure there are others so keep up the good work and update when you have time please.

Great story keep it up =D

Wonderful.

Very good, keep it up, I\'m waiting for another chapter