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Well i was expect a someone from the eva cast to hook up with Shinji in this chapter but im certainly not dispointed that it wasnt. This was a very good there wasnt a single thing in this chapter that i could critisize agaisnt it was ALL good :)

I have read up to chapter 7 Interesting. The girl inm the sevemnth chapter is definitelly a contender indeed!

Chapter 7: Nicely written. I don\'t know the female lead, but it was well done overall.

And yet another good chapter out. I like how you make the characters complex. Please keep going.

Another good story, keep up the goodwork. I hope that you update eventually.

Chapter 7 was pretty good. You definitely need to do a Ritsuko chapter though.

I really like these stories. They are written really welland are a big hit with the other people I have talked to about them. I am looking forward to chapter 7, keep up the good work!!!

Ahhh, you kick so much ass. Angsty lemons rock.

I really liked fic here, especially the ones with Misato, Maya, and maybe (a little) with Asuka. Though, I gotta ask, what happened to Ritsuko and Rei, they seem like the only ones left that you haven\'t written anything on them yet. I hope you do, cause it be surprising if him and Ritsuko will be anything like him and Misato; or different. Afterall, she\'s supposed to be having something with Gendo, so if she can\'t get what she wants from the man, what would she to with the boy? Oh yeah, the one with Hikaru and Mana were kinda dark weren\'t they, one using him for release and dumping him cause he loved her, and the other turning into love just to get killed before his eyes. Damn... anyway, keep up the great work, cause you really stir my emotions with these; make me laugh, sad, etc. You got some major talent.

This chapter really depressed me, still, thats life. Please put something in so Shinji gets revenge.