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by ChibiFenrir

person Spike of Doom
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter but i think i agree with Asuka being a bit over exagerated emotionaly. Tho not even that could put a dent in this chapter it was good. Looking forward to future updates :)
person Mic123
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very good, continue with the good work
person Mr. Pointy
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The Asuka chapter was pretty good. Short and believeable.
person NoWhere Man
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, in comparison to the other chapters. I think this is my least favorite. Every other chapter of this series had something that was very definite. Something that made it stand out. This chapter reminded me of every other bad Asuka/Shinji fic out there. And I have to also add the emotional change from the Asuka was in the begining of the story to the point where she\'s approaching shinji in his bed, is too great and very unbelievable.
person warpwizard
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. I must say, I\'m impressed by how much you\'ve improved from what I remember of your earlier writings. No offence meant. ;)
person Spike of Doom
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was a sad ending but the story itself was very good and fun to read... tho throughout the entire thing i kinda new it wouldnt end happy. But guesse the only way to solve that is keep on reading your future updates :)
person Siderius
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn...that just broke my heart...poor Mana. Good stuff but damn poor Shinji, Mana\'s my fav character. Great stuff though!
person warpwizard
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4: Very good, I think I liked this chapter best of the four. Felt like one of the old classic evafics. Nice sex scene too. Keep up the good work and thanks for writing.
person Spike of Doom
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was fun to read, I actually never read a story with this parring so it was new to me i guesse. looking forward to the next update cause you havnt disapointed me with any of your stories :)
person Andrew Talon
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First off, I\'ve read every Nightshift story, and personally, I love them. They have plot, deep emotions, moving dialogue, and realistic sex scenes that do justice to the action and the characters. My favorite is the Maya one, simply because I like Maya and she and Shinji together in such a situation was so well portrayed by you. Didn\'t like the Hikari one, but only because of what she did to Shinji. Another thing I like about this series: Everything feels real. It\'s awesome.

Personally, I\'m a fan of Ritsuko/Shinji stories. Maybe because they\'ve both been used and abused by Gendo and might work well together. It would be cool if your next chapter of Nightshift could be about a relationship between the two of them. Post-3I, preferably. They try to \"heal\" together, perhaps? Or, before 3I, when the two of them have a night alone. (shrug) Hey, just offering suggestions, but you\'d really make my day if you wrote it. Thanks again for writing this wonderful piece!

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