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Her was one to make you cry. Your best yet.

the stories are all great, however it just seems that the stories are getting progressively darker which has its advantages and disadvantages. if i remember correctly, you said that eventually you would have a nozumi story, i hope that that story doesnt end up too dark. either way your work is still amazing. thanks.

awesome chapter, man! i've heard about mayumi before, but the way you brought out her character was excellent! by the way, mayumi appears in Rebuild of Evangelion 02: Division

Just finished reading chapter 18 and I have to say that I enjoyed it. Plot-wise, it was up to your usual standard of excellence. The only problems I have with this chapter is the occasional spelling error and, more annoying, several instances where you changed track mid-sentence, leaving a nearly incomprehensible mess behind. ..Ok, it wasn't quite that bad, but it distracting for sure. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Awesome as usual. Even though it was short, has some good angst.

How am I going to suggest who else to put here?

Perhaps...

- An older female sibling that he'd been separated from at an earlier age
- A female police officer (Sorry for my Jiraishin/Ice Blade fanboyness, I'll have to nominate Eriko Aizawa for the role)
- The female NERV technicians from the Shinji Ikari Raising Project manga

N i c e - dude! This whole series of Shinji doing all these things is really interesting. I like how every chapter is a one-shot with alternate realities all around. Its almost like a "Shinji's Black Book Chronicle" thing and its great to see him interact and finally get the girl he meets in bed somehow everytime. I like the different takes/possibilities you took on this character, and for the first day checking it out I read straight through some chapters for a few hours. I haven't read everything yet, but wow it has left an impression and I'll be getting to it. Thanks for putting so much effort into this - its amazing. I'll review once I read everything

"Untitled..."
It NEEDS a title...
Such as...
"Mama's Boy."
This one's a keeper. I listened to Blue October's "Hate Me" while I read it.
But still I wonder...is she Yui, Unit 01, or possibly both?
Cree-py.

I liked the fact you managed to work in Kaji's killer. ^_^
Best line EVER, because it's true (Hell, I'm a girl so I know. ^_~):
“I thought girls didn’t watch stuff like that…” Akemi shrugged as she pushed the video tape in, “Don’t believe that shit. I probably haven’t thought much about it but girls think about this just as much as boys do.” Fufufu. <3

You're doing a great job with this fic series; you helped inspire me to write my own H fic! Please keep up the great work and have any other Asuka/Shinji chapter be about them after 3I; that would rock!
Take care.

Dangit! This was another cool chapter. I honestly thought Naoko was up next...

I'll be giving out some suggestion on what the next chapters should be.

I just read chapter 1 and liked it.

The way you started and ended with a sex scene was interesting. This is an unusual Hikari character, secretes and cheating, along with rough casual sex. On the one hand she seems to be using both men as “boy toys”. Yet the character seems to be deeper with issues that she needs to resolve. At the rate she is going she, would, get pregnant raising the question “whose is it”?

I’ll keep reading as time permits.

DC (AKA 94saturn)