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Cool stories, but are you gonna do a Rei bit she always was my favorite. Oh well don\'t mind me Ireally did like the stories update soon, and have you considerered continuing any of these I think 2,3 would work well.

What up? This is the author.

I quit this crap. >_<

Joking of course. Seriously, my cable went off on me so I was gone for a few weeks. Moving along, I read and enjoyed every review. ;_; To get back to some of you:

To really tell the truth, I felt like I half wrote the first chapter and, obviously, Hikari was out of character intentionally. If I put more effort into it, I could have made the first chapter better but hopefully the boys at Studiotorium can help me with that. ~_~ I\'m actually writing these pretty quick and, believe it or not, I have some pretty odd ideas for most of the cast.

The funny thing about it is that I don\'t really know about my Ritsuko/Shinji chapter. Great teacher Mr. Nodsri stressed that I should stay away from writing it but I will try. ;_; In my quest to write Nightshift, I will leave no female member untouched (Yui and Ritsuko\'s mother, Naoko I believe, are dead so no writing them in even if I wanted to... <_<)

I\'ll have the next chapter someday. ~_~

Yup each of your stories has its high points.. im gonna look forward to your next short story because they just keep getting better :)

Yup each of your stories has its high points.. im gonna look forward to your next short story because they just keep getting better :)

Bob: Well I think the last chapter (3) was rather good, I mean in an Eva logic world it seemed to fit the bill, and your were certainly more IC than OOC. I did enjoy the first two chapters, but the sense of rape in them, despite even if it is not rape; Shinji i think didnt want to have sex with Misato and HH - he was almost forced into it - IE borderline rape. Though I need more, its very good and I hope you have a healthy writing future.

Dave: Hmmmmm, I dont know to be honest, well i thought the first one was like - welll shinji was IC but HH was not, the series HH was more giggly school girl, the second one i was more disturbed, Shinji and Misato relationship was an age gap issue. I\'d like Misato to be younger to give the reader something to think bout. The 3rd one was unbelieveable. I preferred to Maya to have a mental breakdown, she could not mentally cope with being a survivor. Shinji and Maya pairing - why? They barely interact in the series at all. Other than that, but a one time it was pretty damn good.

Cool stuff, how about a Ritsuko chapter? :)

kool man make the next one a shinji ritsko

great story, cant wait for the next chapter
*wants a asuka chappy* ;D

you\'re gettin better every run, fenman. other than a few grammar/word choice errors, pretty good. nice plot idea, even though it\'s too short to develop fully. ehh what else..... hrrrr...
10 for effort, 10 for style, 9 for execution. almost but not quite perfect. although, that\'s only a 3.3 percent reduction, so it doesn\'t matter much. keep at it.

Well this sercond chapter is impressive on a siubtle level, If Misato was NOT drunk when they both made love,(Or SEX) then it speaks volums in a wayu of her commitment and feelings towards Shinji, likewise in Shinji\'s case his hesitance to engage in the act and his uncertainty to bridge the gap a bit, means he is not treating Misato as some sort of sex object indeed he is still shinji and a little better at imnteraction indeed.

I look forwad to see what develops between the girls and Shinji after all it is one thing to fool around for sex\'s sake, but an entirelly different thing to mess around wiyth someones heart

Safe to say I would hazzard that Misato is one up on Hikari at least where shinji\'s heart is concerned, as in a base level Misato seems concerned about Shinji and vice versa on an emotional level, whilst Hikari wants to hide the times she spent with Shinji like some kind of dirty little secret.


Waiting for more to read
BrianDarksoul~