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The pairing wasn't exactly my cup of tea and it bothered me to see you killed off Asuka (sob) (as well as Misato-san!) but the chapter itself was written well. So I guess you're gonna do a chapter each with Shinji having sex with all 3 women inside each Evas? Just so you know, the soul inside zerogoki (Unit 0) is Rei I, NOT that nonsense of Ritsuko's mother. I really hope that stupid rumor would just die. Several series facts show this: Episode 14: when Shinji is inside Unit 0, he feels Rei's peresence the last thing he sees is Rei I, looking creepy as she floats toward him. Rei I goes beresk and tries to kill Ritsuko for revenge: Naoko killed her. Episode 23/23', when Rei II is being attacked by the 16th Angel: "Who is it? Me? The Me inside Eva? No, something else." It seems like each of these chapters are stand-alone, which I personally think is an excellent way to write something like this. ^_^

Ok this might sound wierd but I've read this chapter somewhere before and it's up to like three chapters now. If it's you cool it makes a good story if not I thought you should know.Later

Thanks, can you email me concerning that though or leave the name or the story and the site it's on? I can see if it's Remember Me but I've only seen four stories making Kyoko a main character including mine. Hope no one just didn't straight up take the chapter though, takes me months to write this stuff sadly enough. ;_;

and as allways a great story.

Chapter 16 - Eternal

Nice writing. Story didn't seem to have as much of a point as your usual, but it was still fun to read. Thanks for writing. :)

Cute chapter, I really am impressed by how you're able to build an entire chapter out of characters that barely are shown in the show.

another revival from the dead.
good stuff as always. hope real life calms down and we see more of you around here.

I have really enjoyed this series, but up until these last two it was just a regular "Oh that's nice" kinda thing. But with this one and the one with Yui I can honestly say that they were very enjoyable. I think the fact that you used these characters in such a way is what made it better for me, I mean with all the talk about Unit 00,01, and 02 housing the souls of Yui, Kyoko, and Naoko you think it would be used more often, but I can honestly say that I have only read two other fics that had Yui (especially Yui) and Kyoko interacting with Shinji or anybody else whether in a sexual way or as a mother looking after her children, which was the case in one story on ff.net that had all three speaking to their children. So keeping in this train of thought how about one more ghost story before you go to something else.

Nice update. I liekd the new chappy nad who knew the next girl would be asukas mom? Your ending always leave me thinking and wishing there was much more but they are very well done and thought out. Good job dude

man, keep it up. i'd like to see more of these.