rate_review Reviews

I think you said that you'd do 2 fics of Shinji/Asuka and Shinji/Rei? If that's the case, I have a request. For the 2nd Shinji/Asuka one, could you have it take place after EoE? (ie: When they're still on the beach.) I'm curious to see what you're interpetion of that scene would be like!
Thanks, and keep up the good work with your fic!

i love your story not beacuse of the sex...(im may br a guy but i have a soft side ...lol)

but my absoulte fav was ch 10 with the angel i thought that was the most touching story i have ever read in fanfic.

it was to me...i cant find the words for it.

i must see more of there stroy it has to go on!!

ahhhh *hopeless romantic*

Wow. Excellent writing. I just finished chapter 6. Ya know, I never really liked Asuka and Shinji untill now. Excellent writing. Very descript, a quality I hold in high regard. Most of all, all of the chapters have a great deal of emotional value, which is rare to find in any kind of writing involving sex. Love the stories, love the writing.

I didn't want to update the story just to let you know that I'm a bit busy this time around. I kind of hate using reviews for this type of thing but I planned to update around this time but I got some little stuff to take care of first. I'm trying to be consistent but I should probably practice completing chapters first. ^_^;

Thanks for the reviews everyone and believe me I know. I'll explain in an author's note sooner or later but, more importantly, I was supposed to enter a contest and missed it because of bad luck road. >_< Keytobais5 runs a Evangelion lemon contest, ELC, every now and then and I somehow managed to miss every single one on up till now. Run a search for him on Google or the like and something should come up, I really recommend reading Lara's World At Its End. I'll enter the next one for sure but, for now, my failed entry is on Mediaminer with some of the other entries.

That's pretty much it, back to writing now.

Ignoring the sexual act depicted, i must say that this was wonderfully written. It isn't often that I feel any sort of emotion when reading, this tugged upon my heart strings quite a bit. I Envy your ability to convey such tings.

I really like this stories- not so much for the sex as for the pure emotiong and feeling in each one of them. Even if the writing isn't that great, and the sex is a bit sub-par, I still find myself being drawn into each and every one of the plots. I think you capture the more dramatic feel of the show perfectly, despite a few instances of OOC behavior. The romance here might actually be better without sex on occasion, because some of them are so touching that the smut seems a bit tacked on and don't serve much of a purpose, but of course, if you had done that, then you wouldn't have posted the story on this site. I think you've done a great job creating some truly fine romance here, and i'm enjoying it very much.

loved the Shinji/Ritsuko and Shinji/Arael chapterts. really think you should continue chapter 10's story. and as for a Shinji/Naoko fic? if any one can make it work its you man. I can't seem to find many Shinji/Ritsuko fics out there.

Keep up the fantastic work!

awesomness that update was geat dude and well thought out but I wanted some more it was sad it had to end that way
but its work from a badass like yourself and I mean dat in a good way. Later and Rock on Dude.

So far, chapter 11 is my favorite. I think you should continue that story. At least write about the day after.