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i really like these storys. can you make another shinji/asuka one again please.

Amazing. Story #15...
Truly, absolutely spectacular. I love the series, please continue it...! You know... If you feel like it. o.o

Dear Chibi Fenirir,

Excellent story. So Unit 01 as a being, not as a machine, was created by the maternal instincts of Yui. Nice, a lot better than I thought it would be. And actually I'm really glad you wrote it, I've always wanted to see a Shinji/Unit 01 story. I mean come on, the thing has the Soul of Yui but it has it's own thoughts as well no? If you rewrite one the chapters, by all means friend do it! It's your work, change it, cut it up, tear it to pieces until you're satisfied with it.

Take care I can't wait to see the rest.

Sincerely,

Konous the Grey

I absolutely love this series. I have so many fav pairings, ShinxMaya, ShinxMisato, ShinxRei, ShinxMana, Shinxetc, heh, and no matter what theres always an excellent, well-writtain scene in this series for them all. Just wondering, do you take ideas? I couldnt submit a request, it'd be another Shinxmaya or something, hehe, but just wondering, have you ever given any thoughts to the female security staff? Theres no telling if Section 9 had any female members, or any of the security officers.

Chapter 15: Excellent work. I can see how it would be hard to write. :)

Hot fucking dog, you updated! I love you, you son of a bitch!

I just read the latest chapter. I just have to ask, man...What are you doing? What are you doing here? I mean you're writing this trandscendental, fucking mind/heart/madness-expanding shit and I just can't understand it. I mean this is brilliant. This is the human condition; the eternal sunshine of the spotless mind. I'm not just buttering you up, either; normally I neither love nor hate fanfiction authors. I just don't care. My apathy is so powerful I cannot even bring myself to type up a derisive remark in a review of a bad piece of writing. But this is so...I don't even care about the sex. I mean it furthers the story, but in a way that's a fucking galaxy past normal romance. I don't know what to tell you. I mean I've read Kafka, Bukowski, Fante and Milton and I can say without even a trace of undue charity that if your writing was in a paperback, I'd buy it.

Keep it up. Write some original stuff, too. And when you do let me know. I'm keeping an eye on you. Goddamn am I keeping an eye on you.

Sure was expecting this, but not expecting a vision of Yui doing the you know what with Shinji...

Even if it wasn't what I liked (Sorry, am that picky!), am glad that a Shinji/Yui story was there. Thanks, comrade. Maybe I'll dream that another one will be done soon. ^_^

is it just me or is the "Nurse" The love child of Asuka and Misato. Any way GREAT stories so far and I cannot WAIT unitl you update.

Ja Ne

Pardon for reviewing you again, but I'm currently anticipating for the Shinji/Yui story!