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Hurrah! I'm glad to hear you haven't abandoned the story.

If I may make a suggestion, I feel it'd be pretty cool if some of the chapters involved Shinji 'being with' two women at a time, if you catch my visual gist. I admit this is also a thinly veiled attempt by me to get you to lengthen the series so I get so see more of your writing.

Thanks for the support everyone. I've been really busy lately but I'm sure I'll be able to update in a while. The main reason for the pause was the lack of writing I did while the site was technically down and reason is simply because I can't really predict how people will take the next chapter but it's all good. ^_^;

Just a matter of actually getting some time to write now but I know I won't stop till I'm finished. If I can't finish Nightshift then I'll never be able to finish or even start another story.

When are you going to start writing again, man? I love this series.

I read these stories, and i have to say that the plots of your stories were the most realistic I have seen. Cant wait to see your next one.

what, no penis sucking

Woo, another great chapter. I like the brief but pivotal role of Gendo, he helps Shinji because instead of being the spineless wimp who dosen\'t try, who dosen\'t attempt, Shinji finally shows his desire/ambition for more. Great little twist on Gendo\'s character, the father who dosen\'t know how to show love, but pushes the son until the son pushes back. Resulting in less spineless son o.O

I just had a fap-fest during my reading marathon... On another note, since I can't find any criticism other than the grammatical mistakes.... *Begins to worship CF*

I'm never one to leave reviews for fics I read, but I'm willing to make an exception. You're a great writer, you probably know that already, but I just can't say it enough. I usually find NC-17 fics tasteless and the only reason I visit this site is coz of my hopes of finding fics that give graphic description of fight scenes, all that gore and stuff, which is usually toned down or censored in most fanfic sites. Luckily, I read this compilation of amazing standalones. I'm impressed on how much detail you provide so as to give life to your characters, you don't simply skip to the hot-steamy sex just for the sake of writing one. You invest enough emotions to each of them so that when it comes to the rater-R stuff, your readers can't help but appreciate the physical connection you're trying to create between Shinji and the other female characters. I'm also floored with how able you are with maintaining Shinji in-character despite the unusual situations you place him in - Shinji getting in a intimate relationship with a female is highly unlikely to happen in the show but the way you write his reactions, emotions are enough to make me believe otherwise, even for just a short time. The endings are also very impressive, each one is in a league of its own. My favorite so far has been 'Discord'. I hope you write a sequel to that.

Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Keep it up! Post more soon.

Marvelous, simply marvelous! Chapter 14 I really like. I find your OC's are the better chapters, now that I think about it...

Ah, when I said next to last chapter I meant that, aside from the next made up character, that the rest of the chapters should feature characters named in the series. ^_^;; To clarify, Contact is the next to last chapter to have an original character. I still have a lot of characters left to deal with. Here is an updated list if that means anything to you.

Asuka
Rei
Section 2 Agent
Yui (Yeah... ~_~)
Naoko (Loving on the MAGI just a bit too much. ~_~)
Kyoko
Nozomi
Mayumi (I probably should start looking for a Second Impression guide. ~_~)

It's a good thing I've waited to deal with most of those characters because I already know they have the most difficult chapters to write not to mention that I don't have much to work with in some cases. I feel like I'm forgetting something important but it'll come to me later. I know I sound redundant but I'm really trying my best and, when I think I can't write a chapter, these reviews prove to me that I can. Also, I don't mind hearing what you want to say at all. ^_^ That's what reviews are for and, with that, back to writing. >_< I hope people are cool with the next chapter. o.o