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Hmm, great one-shot as always, but I wonder what all that about Gendos arm was. His arm was off? Did he already do that wierd thing with Rei in Terminal Dogma where his hand gets clipped off? If that is so, shouldn't he, and everyone else besides Shinji have had their AT fields opened?

Kinda confusing, but all in all, high quality fiction as always from you man, hehe, nurses...

Oh, and also, I'm really happy to hear that Arael was one of your chosen to continue her timeline, even though you did say it was Ritsuko that gets first priority. Really liked Sentient, I still read it from time to time.

Chapter 14 was fucking boring dude. A literal snoozefest. It really wasn't up to your usual standard.

I really enjoy this little short collection.

... I almost wish every chapter could become their own story. I remember stumbling across it a while ago and opening it for more vulgar reasons, but once I got to reading... I've been addicted to romance for a while now, so I guess it was only natural I got attached to the endings you gave these shorts. I sorely want more out of them (discluding the mechanic, but...), yet they seem complete in their own way.

Thank you for a wonderful writing style.

another fantastic chapter. Its a delight seeing you update because i know that your updates are each an original piece of evangelion fanfiction and that for a little while I can be free of all those lame cliches :)

You updated fast! I can't believe it! First thing that I wanna say is that my heart kinda broke while I was reading the chapter. I can understand how Chikaru must have felt when she finds out that her husband's backstabbing her.

This is the 2nd to the last chapter? Man, there are some people worth mentioning here (No guys, I won't repeat the list) from the EVA series. Though this is not meant to rant you or anything, I just feel that some people should be here as well.

Dropping the ranting down, nice chapter. Really liked it.

Contact: Good stuff. Nicely different.

yet another great chapter, but i just have a feeling that it could have been more intence. really, naughty nurses are so much fun

I think if you did a follow up chapter to Sentient it would be really interesting. But that\'s just me, anyway I enoy your stories. Keep up the good work.

A wonderfully sustained series, with truly detailed characterisation. I would be grateful to have some different takes on some of the characters you've already written about though, Misato and Hikari in particular. Perhaps a surprise like a threesome or a story sans the sex scene might keep things fresh too. Best Evangelion stories since Home/Bodies these.

wow, i had thought this story abandoned. nice to see your still working on it.