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February 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
It was new and I'm open-minded....I really enjoyed this story, and I love Hiko! Baka deshi!!!!!
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November 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I must admit your plot are really good, but I really want to hold the idea of Kenshin being faithful to Kaoru. I don't want him to have another child with another woman, but I respect what you have in mind for this fic. Good work, thank you.
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First of all... i HATE you! i hated how you turned Kenshin into a rapist, i hate you for making this so difficult to digest, i hate you because i can't enjoy the lemony goodness of this story if it were about Kenshin and Miyori and most of all... i hate you for being so good and making me so addicted to your story! i hated the first parts, but i just can't resist reading it! Anyway, what i'm trying to say is, i DiD hate you... But now, i kinda love you... [the more you hate the more you love?] i have to admit, you are very good... And like you said, this story is very different from the other. i admire your handiwork! Sorry for the flames in the beginning... Anyway, keep up the good work!
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I Loved reading your story up to the very end. I honestly didn't think this one could possibly end well. Even so I continued to read, knowing I would probably regret it later. Well I couldn't have been more wrong. I loved the ending. It was a surprise and a relief to find my self smiling for a change.
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great it maybe your best work ever.
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw, man! I was kinda hoping that Kenshin was going to kill him! so much for a dark chapter. che. Saito's plan was so unfriggin' believably simple, and predictable! why didn't kenshin even think of a way out?!?!??! (even if he was totally bogged down by all this crud going on! he coulda come up with an equally similar plan that Saito did!) gosh....
Anyhoo... I totally dig this story so far, but I seriously was hoping for this to have been an uber dark chappie. your making the happy ending come too easilt. ~_~;;;;
Anyhoo... I totally dig this story so far, but I seriously was hoping for this to have been an uber dark chappie. your making the happy ending come too easilt. ~_~;;;;
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Finally, an ending! You don't know how happy you made me! Now I'm kinda glad I was sick today and got to stay home to read this wonderful story... I was checking it almost everyday for soooo long... I love the ending, and I'm so glad that Hiko found someone, too. I'm not usually such a gushy reviewer... but I was waiting for sooo looooong, so it just makes it all the sweeter. :-) Thanks for finishing, and I look forward to more stories from you!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I may have guessed the plot, but it was a stellar ending. One of the best stories I've read. Sorry I haven't reviewed for a bit. I kept checking to see if you'd updated, and you hadn't. Then all of a sudden there's a butt load of chapters. WooHoo! Great way to spend a morning.
God bless, sweeting.
Looking for more from you. Hope the move goes well.
tsuki-san
God bless, sweeting.
Looking for more from you. Hope the move goes well.
tsuki-san
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yaaayyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You've finally updated. I'm so happy!!! Oh my god the baby is born. What happens to Kenshin and Kaoru. I think that Hiko and Miyori would make a cute couple. Are you gonna try and get those two together? I hope so.
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my.... I do like this.... kudos sweetpea on a very good job, especially since this is your first attempt. I have'nt actually seen any Kenshin episodes, but have vowed to make it a New Years resolution to get into it.... but your story animates the basic plot of the show quite well, if that makes any sense *doh!* Let me explain that a bit better.... your style of writing is very good and I'm able to grasp the basic concept of the show's plot, which only makes me want to run off and start downloading some episodes asap! Oh... and I like your creative use for those useless flames *lol* I think that's putting them to very good use yeah ^_^ but let's hope you won't be seeing too many of those... and if so... it'd just be sour grapes yeah cos this story is sweet!
Happy New Years and looking forward to reading more ^_~
Happy New Years and looking forward to reading more ^_~