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by Marlingrl

person shiko-chan
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hoo hoo! very interesting! ^.^ i\'m totally at a loss as to what could happen next. hiko moving in, i mean visiting... egad. this is gonna be good. ^.^
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just discovered your story and read it all in a day. It\'s so wonderful to find a lemon story that actually has a plot! Your lemons scenes aren\'t distasteful and dirty like so many out there, it just adds to the story and makes everything seem more realistic. You are a very talented writer and I\'m enjoying your fic immensely. I love the idea and how you\'ve tied everything together so far. I do, however, have one suggestion: I\'m not too familiar with Japanese, and I\'m sure that there are others that aren\'t as well. Could you possibly include a dictionary at the end of your fic to explain the meanings?
person prettyslr
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more more more!
person tinkerbell
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy, all hell is about to break loose soon. Can\'t wait !!
person YourBigFan
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU HAVE GOT TO FINISH THIS STORY!!!!! I am in total suspense, I hope Kenshin doesn\'t have to leave Koaru for the other girl. It would be so sad if the baby was born and then Kenshin was thrown into hell just when he and Koaru found happiness. But you truly are a great writer and I can\'t wait for you to finish the story.
person Anon
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o LOVE this thing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz continue on w/ the story as soom as possible
person mel
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like your story. i have a sickening feeling that its going to become really heart braking for all the characters involved in the next couple of chapters. anyway please keep up the good work and update soon.
person jeez
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Maybe Miyori would die and it will be K+K. * Looks hopefully*
person nina
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'m going to be very, very disappointed if this doesn\'t end up k+k
person Lin
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
still wonderful... just as all the others. I am still wondering what will happen with poor myori.

tsuki-san

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