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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*grins* Great fic. luv these two. ^^
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Considering that I'm not usually one that likes OOC. This was really good! Expecially if you were to compare this story to some of the other Hasununa and Mitsuo stories I've read. They're all c**P mostly, but this one was good. OOC but really really good. I do hope that you write some other Hasununa and Mistuo stories besides just this one.
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good. I liked the switch in personality.
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was a little disappointed at the lack of lemony-ness, but your fic was still good. You were right, going with the first-person narrative instead of third-person POV. This story would not have been nearly as good if it wasT-P POV. ^,~
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! ^__^ YEASH FOR SEME MITSOU!!! ^__^;;
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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That, my friend, is a hippo smile! That means \"Me really likey!!\" I do really adore how you made Mitsuo so...aggressive! But poor, stupid Hasunuma....*tut*tut* He\'ll NEVER get the pretty boy if he RUNS AWAY!! Perhaps a fitting punishment!! BAD BISHIE! NO YAOI FOR YOU!! And so on! ^_^ But one day...one day...Why are they so sexy?! POR QUE, WHY?! O.o and...I\'m done....I very much enjoyed since it was so cute!! VERY cute and hoolarious!! Not hilarious, but hoolarious, it\'s a whole new category of humor!
That, my friend, is a hippo smile! That means \"Me really likey!!\" I do really adore how you made Mitsuo so...aggressive! But poor, stupid Hasunuma....*tut*tut* He\'ll NEVER get the pretty boy if he RUNS AWAY!! Perhaps a fitting punishment!! BAD BISHIE! NO YAOI FOR YOU!! And so on! ^_^ But one day...one day...Why are they so sexy?! POR QUE, WHY?! O.o and...I\'m done....I very much enjoyed since it was so cute!! VERY cute and hoolarious!! Not hilarious, but hoolarious, it\'s a whole new category of humor!