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for Chapter 7

by Leloi

person Mistr3ss Quickly
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! A beautiful story that shows just how cruel Yuki really is, and Shuichi's motivation ... I liked the misalignment you illustrated between Yuki's lust and Shuichi's love.

This is a great look at Gravitation.

~MQ
person PIKACHU GODDESS
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um...There IS going tobe a next chapter, right?

PIKACHU GODDESS
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person PIKACHU GODDESS
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOHHHHHH!!!! That was EXCELLENT!!! I especially liked the ending, how it turned out to be Eiri writing about his and Shuichi\'s first time, instead of \"a story about similar characters.\" Can\'t wait to read the next chapter!

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person DivinePunishment
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was confused about the names at first, but now I get it...creative. I liked it quite a lot. =)

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