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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... very well written. And interesting ;-) Only one thing - I personally find the word *whispers* \"cock\" a bit unpleasant; don\'t know... it feels vulgar =/ But the rest is more than ok! Keep it up!
And sorry for the pun ^^;;
Kisses
And sorry for the pun ^^;;
Kisses
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg!!! such a great fanfic!!! i\'ve been wanting to read one of those in sho long!! i love it!!! keep writing please!! update soon!!! i see that you haven\'t updated in so long!!!! keep up the great work!
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to update? i thought when i come back, i can read tons of chapters. come on, update more please
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s really great fan fic. I really want to read next chapters! I hope that you didn\'t droped this story. You\'re great at writing love scenes. TsukasaEsukushi rulez! :D
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s really great fan fic. I really want to read next chapters! I hope that you didn\'t droped this story. You\'re great at writing love scenes. TsukasaTsukushi rulez! :D
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Good HYD fanfics are always a good thing. This was extremely well done, especially compared to most of the Honeymoon Cruise stories i\'ve read. I hope you write more. ^___^
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope to see the new chapter ASAP!!!! Please and thank you! MewMew01
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i remember reading this on fanfiction.net.. and i just remember it being this good.... if you write more could you email me and let me know... my email is dannygirl720@aol.com
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, this is a really hot lemon.. Not to meantion a very well written one, haven\'t seen any good het in ages! I love how you\'ve written Domyoji, he\'s in character and so sweet! Update soon because it\'s gonna be a long cruise right?
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story! I\'m more of a manga fan but your lemon is pretty good! Can\'t wait for the next chapter... Please don\'t take a long time, ok!? Keep up the great work!