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poor Robin, *throws sour milk at memories* i deffinately sypmathise with her pain, even Amon's attitude is scarily familiar o.O
a very good read *thumbs up*

Awesome!!!

I am in awe of your writing. Good for ya!!

Oh yeah. I just love this one.

The first few times I\'ve read this fic, I thought it was simmering to boiling hot. \"Get me a fan!\" I thought. And \"Could Amon the Brooder get any sexier? Of course he can, especially when he becomes Amon the Funny.\" Which, although very entertaining, did seem kind of OOC as did Robin\'s character in this fic. Sort of, kind of OOC, but I liked it anyway.

But you know what? Those initial thoughts of OOC-ness were completely wrong. Amon\'s humorous sarcasm *is* in character. Robin\'s sweet but insistent bossiness is also in character. (Special kudo goes to the detail of the way Robin doesn\'t waste a single crumb of the coffee cake. Totally fitting for her.)

Why do I think this? Well, after watching my beloved fansubs of WHR from start to finish this past weekend, I realized I missed a hell of a lot, ESPECIALLY the subtle humor that exists in both Robin and Amon. That\'s the thing with WHR. It is so easy to pick up the obvious that the subtleties of their personalities are missed. But this fic, as sexy a lemon as I\'ve ever read, focuses on the subtle traits of the characters rather than the stereotypical Robin as sweet and Amon as brooding. That\'s what sets your funfics apart from the many of the WHR fics.

Re-reading this fic reminds me strongly of the episode \"6: Raindrops\" in which Robin\'s quiet, stubborn streak appears as does Amon\'s dry humor. She grabs him to help her and she pretty much tells him what she wants. What makes the whole thing funny (and correlates to this fic) is that the guy does it. At one point in the episode, Amon even says something like, \"I had no idea you could be so pushy.\" He\'s annoyed but only slightly so and at the same time, you get the feeling that he likes this part of Robin, because he supports her every step of the way. \"Raindrops\", to me, is the episode in when I started to get the feeling that Amon\'s interest in (and respect for) Robin took a definite turn and this fic definitely highlights their personality traits that creep up in that episode.

After re-watching that episode, it gives me a greater appreciation of your work both here and at ff.net.

Hope you have more of these coming but if you don\'t, then I\'ll just keeping enjoying this one.

Respectfully ~ BRG (aka Puaena)

HOLY FUCK GIRLY!!!

This was so funny I just couldn\'t stop laughing... and then the pr0n!!! OMG Pr0n!!

Sorry I didn\'t see this sooner, bad ne bad BAD me. I loved the pony and the moon... I think I remember something about that on Harry\'s, but I didn\'t know you were going to turn it into a story. See, this is what I get for not paying attention. *smack* ~beats self~

Have I told you lately that I love you? You are the wind beneath my wings.

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

wow that was amazing although amon was a tad ooc but hey \\w a lemmon like that who fucking cares

good story, my god do you know how to write a good sex scene or what? keep up the good work

Wow that was very great

Eep. It was interesting, but I like \"Endymon\" so much better because Amon and Robin seem more IC in that fic rather than this one. Don\'t get me wrong, Amon was in character, but Robin\'s characterization was driving me nuts. It was wonderfully writen, but the characterization was little to hard to like =/