rate_review Reviews

Awesome! Awesome awesome awesome! I was so angry earlier because I was reading this but couldn\'t finish because my father desperately needed the computer... but he left the computer on for me when he was done! ...However, he forgot that he had the screensaver enabled - password included - so because I wasn\'t able to jump online right away, it popped up and it took me even longer to get back on. O_O That\'s my story for you.

Anyway... I will tell you what I particularly enjoy about this - Amon\'s sense of control. Yeah... I\'m one of THOSE people. Hahaha... I don\'t know, it just gets me when a character like Amon is so... in control...

Er - but yes. Very believable. I hardly think it possible for such a stoic man to melt into a puddle of goo at the sight of Robin (or whatever). What\'s great is though you kind of get the feeling that Amon is very much in love with her and is probably inwardly melting into goo, he manages to remain in control (there\'s that word again) and be the same outwardly that he usually is - except he has more casual conversation with Robin. Woot! You also make the casual conversation believable as well. Who would have believed that someone as seemingly detached (per se) as Amon would be able to hold a casual, and slightly entertaining, conversation with anyone? After reading this, I DO.

Hooray!

~Reikon~

It was a great story. It was a nice surprise that Amon and Robin were already in a relationship. I got a kick out of that. But what was Amon\'s gift to Robin?

That was beautiful...the originality of the scene simpy blew me away. The description was wonderful and the interaction between Amon and Robin well done. Amon\'s idea of tying Robin was a great one; I was glad to see that you added that spice to the story. Amon\'s sarcasm was absolutely hilarious, despite the OOCness of it all (but I\'m sure you did that on purpose). I also loved that line about the neighbours, it sure had me laughing. This is probably one of the best A/Rs I\'ve ever read ^__^

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

very good! normally i dont read A/R because its sooo predictable. u r so good. much better than me. gj.

This is great. And I don\'t mean it like wow this is great to get off with. It\'s just freaking great to read. Most people who write porn make it way too cheesy and predictable. But this had wonderful humor as well as a cute little story. The random line of \"The neighbors must hate us\" was just awesome. Your story was arousing and hilarious all at the same time. Wonderful, wonderful job... and a Merry Christmas to you.