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owww... i really love this story T_T. its not really oc, though a bit au, but still!!!!! how i love them both here.... i wish you'd really update T_T. this is one of those few stories that are really worth waiting and reading for. drama and sweetness!!!!

This story leaves you hungry for more, even more when you find out you\'ve reached the last chapter T____T It\'s a nice FF, enough sex and nastyness in it to keep the pervs in us alive and happy, enough romance and story to keep you reading on and on. Small annoyances (like thee instead of the and other minor differences in language etc.) won\'t keep you from enjoying this FF. Lovely lovely work. ^^

Hello I have just read your fic and I totally love it. Omi/Yohji parings are so rare to see and you have done it in a way that doesn\'t seem perverted by the age difference. I was squirming in my seat reading about what you put the poor boy through. I especially love hte way you addressed the issue of the doctor. I have a friend who had a similar experience with an ER doctor. He and his boyfirend had gone there to seek medical treatmnet for him and the ER doctor treated them like second class citizens. You don\'t expect to see that type of reaction from a healthcare worker but it happens and you portayed it well. I am totally looking forward to see where you go with this story.

thanks for a great read.
Kira

This is getting sooooo good! While I hate the fact you\'re just almost getting there then angsting it up again, I love it at the same time. That\'s good writing right there!!! This has to be the best YohjiXOmi fic I\'ve read! In fact, you\'ve inspired me, and I\'ll be putting up the first chapter of my own YohjiXOmi real soon!

I noticed a couple of the chapters in the middle change POV, but either way, it\'s a great story. I love your angsty oh-so-teen Omi! Your story makes me giggle, in a good way!

oh oh a 3some i just know thats what hes talking about please up date soon you always take so long

that was great i think in a later chapter yojhi is drinking a cocktail and omi asks what he is drinking yoji says its called sex on the beach (it a real cocktail you know)

Oh poor Omi!! That was brutal and I am glad Aya killed the S.O.B. Dramtic gripping start my dear. I cannot wait to read more.

Wow, this ficcie has so much potential! I was completely engrossed in the first chapter, and just couldn\'t get enough. You have an extremely interesting plotline going on here. However, some of the grammar and spelling errors make it difficult to read; for example, always using \'He\' for Yohji gets a little confusing. I found myself having to re-read a lot of the fic just to get a vague grasp at what was happening, but take comfort in the fact that I found this to be completely worthy of a second read. Otherwise, you\'ve got a really, really intruiging story going here, nice job! Looking forward to an update!

Great Story! Please continue!

L.