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I'm glad that Yuki put his pushed pride to the side and told Shuichi how he really feels about him. This was a really good short story.

I found your stories through a reccomendation on livejournal and I'm really glad I did. I enjoyed this story very much and I plan to read your other Gravitation stories soon.

In part two of this story, I found a few typos: decent --> descent, Shuichi heart --> Shuichi's heart, (and near the end) heals --> heels, happy your back --> happy you're back. I hope these comments are helpful to you and I mean no offense. I think you write very well and tell a good story. I look forward to reading more. Thanks for writing and sharing.

blissful.

Bwahahaha - this is your fault! I mean it\'s your fault that finally succumbed and took my most recent paycheck and bought all the Gravitation manga that I could XD Just so I could read your stories - I\'m that addicted to your work. I\'m sure you don\'t need a kid like me rambling on about how good your work is, but I enjoyed it and I think that\'s all I need to say. I\'m not a fan of picking away at the \'why\' I like a story - as long as I liked it, that\'s good enough for me ^^

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Lell

This was great. ^^ If you could write a sequel or a prequel, it\'d be even better. ^^

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THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC!! AYAAAA!!!! That is SO how I\'d picture Eiri-sama \"confessing\" his feelings!! WOOT!! And the way you portrayed Shindou-kun is EXACTLY how he starts acting in 9!! WOOT!!!!!!!! I love it SO much!! I really don\'t think I can express to you how amazed I am with this! But even if Gravitation doesn\'t end the way I want it to, I\'ll just read this and say \"This is what REALLY happened, Maki!! IN YOUR EYE!!\" The only thing that drives me nuts about the series is when Eiri-sama even begins to give in to his feelings a bit, something goes horribly wrong and it turns into a comedic scene, killing any and all hope of revealing his love for Shu...*sniffle* IT\'S SO SAAAAAD!! I WANT this to be what happens, because it still stays true to the characters, but it still has that reconciliation! WOOTNESS!! And this is how Shu SHOULD act, hell, I know I would! Who wouldn\'t get horribly depressed with a jerk-face pissy romance novelist for a boyfriend? I just want to poke his eyes out!! GRR!! But this made me like him...A LOT!! Therefore, I like you, too!! *RYU HUG!!* Go you!!

you\'re in for a few BAD surprises. just expect the unhappy. the best gravi fanfic by far is all the way in the beginning called Cruel by reika. it really is fabulous.

This story is pretty awesome so far, especially considering this is your first Gravitation fanfiction. I think it\'s worth continuing, and I\'m looking forward to updates.

Who are you??

XD Ohhh that was good, that was good. I liked it alot.

It made me want to write, and only a select few authors can make me do that.

Please keep writing, I really wanna see where you\'re gonna take this.

--Midnight--

Angsty! But I like!
I would love to see more!

For your first attempt at a Gravi fic, you\'ve done very well.
I hope you keep on suppling our Gravi fanfiction needs!^^



Ja ne~